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for Role Play

by KageKitsuneXXX

person Kelly
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, it's been a long while since I liked a story enough here to review it, but this one took my breath away! XD I don't think I've ever read a more amusing (yet hot and sexy) smut scene like that, and I'm totally thrilled that I did. **glomp** Looking forward to your one-shots if you make them^________^
person ringpop
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Baaaaahahahahhahahaha!!!!!! 'Marinating in his own juices.' AAAAAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHA!!!!!!!

Kage....this ending was SUPERB!!! I'm so satisfied!!! I think out of all the fics i've read i was most satisfied with your ending. It was cute, sexy, witty & oh so loving : ] I really hope to get a sequel from you on this one.....when you have time! THAT'S BE AWESOME!

Hahahahahah "That'll do Sasuke, That'll do." HAHAHAHAHAH okay BABE!!!! hahahaha fabulous job dear FABULOUS!

I'm so surprised this fic isn't OVERFLOWING with hits & reviews This is a real asset to AFF.net....really.
You have a wonderful writing ability/skill
Thanks for using your time to entertain us! Because....certainly......i was entertained
♥!
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I vote 'Yes'.

KingCobra_582@hotmail.com
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YES!! YES!!! YES!!! OMG, YES!!!

I LOVE this story so much I don't even have words. I have cried so much from laughing so hard I don't know how many times. I swear on my life my roomate now thinks I'm on drugs because, for the life of me, I could not stop laughing for most of this last chapter! Oh god, you have to give me more! Absolutely!

Seriously this chapter was awesome. The whole story was simply fantastic. I love zonked out from pleasure Sasuke. He ROCKS MY WORLD. And your cocky, confident Naruto is just pure win. You gave them so much spark! And the smex...oh god, it was so hot. I love how you ended the chapter and the story. It was perfect and so them. You just WIN. Totally and completely! Five Gold Stars for you!

*****
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh! And I forgot to add this vital piece of information! mignonne422@gmail.com

FANFRICKENTASTIC!!!! XD

*****
person SaCyner
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yummy! I love the dynamics between Sasuke and Naruto. They even argue is bed. That is just so cute! And the 'post-sex Sasuke' really made me laugh. So yeah, more of Role play please!!
person MeLaiya
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved this even though it took so long to udpate that I forgot about it and yes, definitely continue it.

P.S.
Your fricken hilarious man!!!
person charmpit
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Super-hot lemons. Naruto owns Sasuke. Naruto has mad fangirls and fanboys. As it should be. The world makes sense again.

This was enjoyable.
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This last chapter was well worth the wait!!! It busted me up while being smexy at the same time!! Wonderful job!!

I vote for the future stories!! please let me know when they come out!

ladywolf_5@yahoo.com
person Anaheyla
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A:NARUTO FINALLY ADMITTED IT!!! Gaw! Also yay!
B:YAY Naru/Sasu smex!
C:Hilarity inherent in the awesomeness of the story
D:Hilarity in Sasuke's brain melting into nothing after an orgasm.

:)