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that was great. sas is so funny. About your idea, not a series i think, but sidestories would be great like the one you did earlier

WILL YOU LET ME BEAR YOUR CHILDREN?!
(I dont know how it's gonna work, but it'll totally work out!)

That was just freaking awesome. I swear- the laundry room scene...*nosebleed* Washing machine sex is something that you're just obligated to write. *wink wink*

You've managed to fit humor, smut, romance and a touch of angst into one story. You're an awesome writer, and you can only improve. Keep up the super special awesome job.

*high five*

twistednekO@yahoo.com

WILL YOU LET ME BEAR YOUR CHILDREN?!
(I dont know how it's gonna work, but it'll totally work out!)

That was just freaking awesome. I swear- the laundry room scene...*nosebleed* Washing machine sex is something that you're just obligated to write. *wink wink*

You've managed to fit humor, smut, romance and a touch of angst into one story. You're an awesome writer, and you can only improve. Keep up the super special awesome job.

*high five*

twistednekO@yahoo.com

WILL YOU LET ME BEAR YOUR CHILDREN?!
(I dont know how it's gonna work, but it'll totally work out!)

That was just freaking awesome. I swear- the laundry room scene...*nosebleed* Washing machine sex is something that you're just obligated to write. *wink wink*

You've managed to fit humor, smut, romance and a touch of angst into one story. You're an awesome writer, and you can only improve. Keep up the super special awesome job.

*high five*

twistednekO@yahoo.com

Sasuke XDDDD! Sasuke!!! *giggles fits* When the fic wasn't being all hot, it was busy making me die of laughter. Sasuke is like a robot, man XD. Sex and then everything just shuts down. He's so cute! And Naruto wins all kinds of awesome awards because Sasuke is a prissy lil' thing XD. And completely insane. Their relationship will never be normal. NEVER XD *loves*

Ahhhhhh.....see what happens when I go away for the weekend; I am rewarded with the last chapter. God I was seriously beginning to worry a bit; it was rather depressing. I was going to wait until later to read but I couldn't help myself (I may have caused a bit of internal injury trying to contain my laughter to a dull roar with my fam in the room). I seriously can't quote a favorite line in this fic with the constant hilarity running rampent through out (although I think the line "Sasuke was a hundred percent, uncut, Japanese drama" comes to mind). I am extremely happy with how you chose to end the last chapter and not make the lemon go perfect and smooth; it wouldn't have went with this fic at all. Yeah I know a long review but hell I owe you one because I have read all your fics and I know my reviews are lacking (you are a review monster that I don't mind feeding). Hmmm...you asked if you should make this into a series; lets see thats a tough decision. Yeah right, of course you should do it. Oh the madness that would insue. But if for some reason you don't then I look forward to reading more madness from you. I'll make you a deal; I'll feed your review monster if you feed my inner bastard with your humor. Keep up with the fantastic writing.

~cai~

i'm all for more role-play stories. this was hot and hilarious, which i love.

Holy Crap! What kind of stupid question is that? Have one of the funniest and greatest stories ever just end o.0 Or have it pop back up uexpectedly every now and again... Hmmm... Let me think o_o (can you feel the sarcasm?) Of course I want More!!! This was fucking hilarious. Only you could make a stop and start sex scene, where the idiots involved keep arguing Sexy as all hell XD. *Glomps u* No honestly that was awesome. You have no idea, LOL, well maybe you have some idea, but to make it clearer - Right now my throat hurts from laughing so much. Seriously I'm going in search of saltprunes as soon as I'm done writing this. And Gods we got not one smex scene but 2. And Fucking Sasuke is so adorable when he's mush. LOL, you said that after having sex once rendered Naruto immune, *snicker* and all I could think was - Dude, you were Mush. You will never be taken seriously again, LOL. I loved this. A fantastic and fitting end to a fabulous story XD. Gods and this was so not forgotten XD. It actually ran through my mind earlier today, I was trying to remember Shika's lawn mower song *snicker* XD. You and your awesomeness. Thank you so much honey *Squishuggles* ♥ Oh and my email is mizrubble22@yahoo.com ;).

I loved this story and am so glad you updated!! Thanks. And whose going to say no to more Naru/Sasu??? not me.... please!
Slave

Awesome! So glad you finished it. I found the last chapter to be more humorous than hot, but it was still hot nonetheless, especially the sex against the washing machine. But it was funny how you made Sasuke ignorant about preparation, his cottage cheese brain, all the random drifting into his own world, and attacking Naruto/trying to get away.

I'd really love it if you made continuations for this fic because I really enjoyed it. If so then let me know: s4r4_88@yahoo.com.au