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by KageKitsuneXXX

person Charlotte
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That's the weirdest sex scene I've ever read. I was laughing so hard. Is that even right? It was really awesome thought. Thanks for the update. I've been waiting for that for so long.
I'm happy but sad at the same time because one of my favorite fic is at an end. (sniff)
Thanks.
person Charlotte
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
By the way thanks for making Sasuke uke.
person beautifullove348
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"This is real life! Not a TV. show, not a tacky romance novel, and certainly not some yaoi fanfiction with over-the-top characterizations and a forcedly humorous plot, by some rabid sex-crazed fangirl with an idealized view of gay men; written for other rabid sex-crazed fangirls and boys, with idealized views of gay men! In real life, Sasuke, you do stuff like that when I have time-off!!" Sasuke remained silent, afraid to say anything lest Naruto gave him another tongue-lashing."

Priceless. Absolutely priceless.

This story was just one hilarity after the other. I loved it, absolutely loved it. It made me laugh so much. And the sex...

Well that was just downright HOTT.

Your writing style was so eloquent and perfect and you really got me into the story and feeling the emotions of the characters. I can honestly say this was one of the best stories of Naruto on AFF.net. Everything was just amazing.

Congratulations on finishing the story, and I can't wait to read your one-shots :) And also to hear more about Manservante! :P
person Sayuri
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gosh, I remember really loving this fic, and I still do. Please please PLEASE finish the fic!!!! I can't stand seeing it unfinished, especially when you said that there was only one chapter left. I really hope you will update this, and it'll make me really happy ^^
person Luna_Meow
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I have been reading this for so many times after this first came out. I wonder if it can actually be finished? 8D I just can't wait for the ending. >_>

I'm done talking. 8D
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG - this fic is awesome. I can't believe I didn't discover it until now, and there's only one more chapter to go. Wow. I'm looking forward to reading it. There were so many moments were I burst out laughing and everyone at my work had to ask me what was so funny (I quickly alt + tab to my spreadsheets). I loved Sasuke's dramatic entrance and how he swept non-Naruto off his feet. And Naruto's little lecture about how hard it was to get away from the hospital was great, it's not as easy as it is in romance novels/shows. :D
person charmpit
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG what does he decide I must know!!!!!!!!!!!
person lunajen
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!! um.. love this chapter by the way. Please update soon!
person A nony mouse
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoo, I luv u and this story! I wanna have ur babies!
person Adi
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok so Sasuke's love confession was the funniest confession, ever the guy trying to get himself signed was the star of the show XD

lol! And Gaara, you make me actually like that little emo freak, and thats hard to do as I have issues with him at the moment, when he pulled out his pen and asked for a name XD!!

ok

omg, the best

the absoulte best bit was Sakura and Naruto and the Elephant, god seriously, it took me so many tries to beta that bit because I kept laughing out loud, Naruto know hows to get under everyones skin XD

The Kaa-chan part was sweet, unexpected and it made me go awww, at least we have some sort of conclusion of Tsundade and Naruto *glares*

"What the... (whap), stop hitting...(smack), WILL YOU QUIT... (whap) SAKURA!!" Sakura has balls and Sasuke just needed to get smacked around a little XD!!

Best. Confession. Ever. Too funny, it had me wincing and laughing and then squinting out the corner of my eye because I couldn't bear to see Sasuke screw himself over again XD

As always, Naruto wins

and then that ending, you just HAD to leave on a cliffy that was slightly angst D: *runs at KK with her giant axe*

love you!