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for Fated Meeting

by Beachan18

person Anon
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is great!! Please continue!!
person blueh
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice work so far. Keep updating. I'd like to see more action. Spice things up a bit. Hehe. It's a good that you made their characters opposite. Very fresh. Ja!

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person Lil-chan
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was awesome! Please update!

Btw, Polar Dancer, the person who is paired up with Itachi is NOT AN ORIGINAL CHARACTER, IT'S YONDAIME! KAZAMA ARASHI IS HIS REAL NAME!

person SasUke28
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lolz naruto iz so childish and sasukez already an azz!
person hakai
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like soooooo much your itachi!!! please, update sooner than possible ^.^ i'm waiting impatiently!!
person fangirl
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cute. I always love stories that have Itachi and Sasuke actually being brothers who like each other...and I like that you don't have Naruto being the social outcast, that's cool. Looking forward to more updates!
person Allys
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was cute and necessary but there was no real interaction between any of the main characters. That's okay it was still entertaining especially Saindaime's eccentricity and Naruto jumping through Tsunade's window XD. That was fun. I can't believe she actually hid him LOL, I'm really excited about the next chapter though. Confrontation!! Dun dun DUH!! XD. Thank you for the update!!
person Its_me_bitches!
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, great story! I love Itachi! He rawkz! If you need a beta, I'm your girl. If you want me to contact me on Gaiaonline.com and PM Uchiha Catsura. alright!
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like how you have Itachi as well. I am very pleasantly surprised you have to be the first to actually put Naruto in a good status. President? cool so he isn't TOOO much of an outcast. Its refreshing and cool. Can't wait til you update. JA!
person amberblood
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely written. Please continue