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for The Prince and the Servant

by Beachan18

schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well done for the first chapter, you've got me interested. OH! i wonder whatsgoing to happen next.Please continue to update. Looking forward to the second chapter! :)
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great start!!! I really hope you plan to continue this and your other story!!
person kai
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
owejrfdhg...does typing random symbles help or does it just confuse you? i hope he doesnt go into denyal when they meet again thats always sad cuz someones always hurting for too long and some get driven mad. hope you update soon !
person Allys
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh!!! This is so cute. Sasuke and Naruto are just adorable and I love the role reversal thing XD. Please update soon.
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg YonxIta is the bomb, ive only read it like once though. you should mos def put it in, if it doesnt ruin the plot or anything.

poor sasuke, he's all alone now. i like that this time naruto gets to be prince, usually he's the servant so it's only fair he gets a chance, hn? anyways, really good so far, update soon, we wanna hear what happens and make sasuke not sad 0.0
person Mandy
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awsome. update really soon.

person julie
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor sasuke, hes all alone.(tear) Reaally good.
person chishio_rikka
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally! A story with Naruto as a prince and the Uchiha clan as the lower class. Good prologue. I can't wait to see what happened to Naruto, and what Sasuke is going to do about it. Please update soon.
Chishio
person Anon
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! u have to update soon! The prologue is so good! And when Naruto said that he was gonna make Sasuke his bride I was so shocked that I hit muh head on muh desk... But cute! Uke Sasuke is so much cuter! Update!
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey, this is awesome so far! please update soon!..