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Ahh okay! I am finding I am a fan of your writing! More so than just the first story I reviewed! Again, please put me on the mailing list :3

bbethard@yahoo.com n.n

Okay...well first I have to say that this is not exactly my cup of tea...I honesty think this story is kinda boring, what with all the thoughts and the skipping days and your not really describing what Taro or Yukikto(sp?) looks like, nor the rest of them, it's kinda annoying but i do like the idea. I just think it would be better if written a different way...

now don't take that the wrong way!! I like this story alot and I want to know more. I want to see how Naruto's walls start to crumble and fall, I want to see Sasuke be all corny and romantic and stuff and I want to see Taro and Sasuke start to like each other. I think it'd be great and i'm eagerly awaiting more, so please keep writing and don't think of the earlier statement as a flame, it's not, it's just what I honesly think...I really do like this story and can't wait to see what happens next, and just for her sake I like Yukiko(am i spelling it wrong? I can't tell) she's pretty cool and i hope she comes back eventually, she's kinda nice, but I'm not sure what she looks like exactly so when she does can you explain it more? just for me? cause it's kinda hard to figure it out.

anyways thats my review take it or leave it!
keep writing can't wait for the next update!
-teania

PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I hate seeing sad Naruto. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Loved your fic- hope you update!!

sorry for not commenting after every chapter but I get so wrapped up in reading I don't want to stop......

OK,,,, This is some good stuff!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I really enjoyed reading this. Hope you post another chapter soon!

Is that light I see at the end of the tunnel? I just might be...a glimmer, a firefly, a lit match...hey, I just thought of something - what if Naruto's son was in danger - would that snap him out of his non-responsiveness?

But I love you, Uzumaki Naruto. And if it takes my entire life to do it, I'll prove to you that I will do whatever it takes to be with you. Even if I have to write messages like these to you every single day, I'll do it. I'll do anything for you.'

That reminded me of the movie 'Mr. Deeds' SO MUCH!! You know, the scene where after they prove that the servent is the real heir, and then Adam Sandler goes off somewhere and the girl chases him. . . That part was to lovely. If only it could happen in real life more often.

-Damp *Man, that sounded so corny.*

I totally understand the whole writers block thing. I went for a month without posting a knew chapter!! Oh well, there's really nothing you can do about it, huh? I really enjoyed the parts with Iruka and Naruto. It's nice to see Naruto open up to someone other than Yukiko and Taro. Oh, I actually like Yukiko. She's a strong female that is rare in the Naruto series. I know that Sakura has gotten stronger in the anime/manga, I still think she is still weak in personality. I'll be sad when Yukiko goes away!! I'm sure Sasuke will figure out something to win back his dobe!! I'll be waiting for the next chapter, no matter how long it takes!!

hehe. i like this story. its awesome. i actually dont mind yukiko either. she pretty cool. and taro, hes so cute. anyway. love the strory. update soon please.

Good chapter, update soon ne!!!!