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for Children of Darkness

by Luma

person noezel7
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. You may say the characters are a little OCC but I think they are perfect the way they are. Naruto has every right to be that broken over what Sasuke did. He was told by the person he loved that he was trash because of something Sasuke should have been happy over. Please keep writing! I enjoy stories like this, where not everything is happy. It makes the story and the characters a little more human.
person Anon
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a nice story.

I guess I can understand how Naruto felt.
He has been an outcast and was hated by the villagers all his life. He has put in sooo much effort to be like by ppl. Finally, he'd tasted love and getting affection from the Uchiha and to lose them all again.
I would be devastated.

I love your style of writing. Poor Naru-chan.
person Rosebud
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well... this is really interesting!
I like it a lot.
But poor Naruto, I feel bad for him.
I hope you update soon, cause I'd realy like to see what happens next.
Take care. ^^