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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. Though babies would've been cool. I'm sick like that though. Dog = win.
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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad those two made up. Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
-inwardhiss- Mpreg? Yeah, I would've felt better if that had been posted as a warning...
It's not to say the story isn't good, I just wouldn't have read it if I had know there would be mpreg. Not that I'm like "OMG GROSS MPREG," I just like there to be consistant things that make logical sense and so far this was doing great... Just, the mpreg seems really random to me along with the sudden jump to 'by the way I'm totally fine now besides withdrawl sympotoms'. Confusing, but you probably have a plan with what you're doing.
It's not to say the story isn't good, I just wouldn't have read it if I had know there would be mpreg. Not that I'm like "OMG GROSS MPREG," I just like there to be consistant things that make logical sense and so far this was doing great... Just, the mpreg seems really random to me along with the sudden jump to 'by the way I'm totally fine now besides withdrawl sympotoms'. Confusing, but you probably have a plan with what you're doing.
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September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That didn't go well, but Kakashi did what he had to to save Iruka's life, the ungrateful bitch/bastard. Always concerned about himself and his mission. He should be grateful to be safe and sound because Kakashi could have left him there to be rape by the guy that injected him with that stuff. Ungrateful bitch/bastard.
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yo.
I have to tell you that I love your story so far, I'm a big fan of kickass Iruka (so many people forget that he's a ninja therefore has probably gutted a few people). Though i will say that mpregs freak me out (they always send me rushing for the back button) if this story flows that way i'll try to wade through my "ick feeling" for i believe you will still make the story worth the read.
I have to tell you that I love your story so far, I'm a big fan of kickass Iruka (so many people forget that he's a ninja therefore has probably gutted a few people). Though i will say that mpregs freak me out (they always send me rushing for the back button) if this story flows that way i'll try to wade through my "ick feeling" for i believe you will still make the story worth the read.
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September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope that "special event" involves Iruka!
Kakashi's going to be so mad.
Kakashi's going to be so mad.
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really want to see the next chapters now! Poor Iruka!
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August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice story! I read the thing in one go and i really life the premise. I wonder whats going through Kakashi's mind now after that kiss! Do update soon!
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is -excellent! Great fun, a delight to read, and Iruka utterly fantastic in chpt 8! Action, adventure, and a hard fast distraction smootch! Tch, jounin who zoom up through the ranks too bloody fast have no respect for the chuunin mainstays, do they? *grin* (I feel rather sorry for the dog, poor thing, the only one with half a clue.) The story so far has had me grinning foolishly at my computer. I'm looking forward to how you (and Iruka!) progress.
-d.
-d.
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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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I'm glad you made iruka tough. i am sick of stories where he is a weakling. I mean he is a shinobi even if he is a teacher. Now he has to go on a mission. I can't wait to find out what will happen next
I'm glad you made iruka tough. i am sick of stories where he is a weakling. I mean he is a shinobi even if he is a teacher. Now he has to go on a mission. I can't wait to find out what will happen next