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by RotSeele

schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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i love insane-psyco-stauker!Kakashi he is my favorite. I also like the statement genin shaped holes in their hearts....sad. sasuke pissed me off when he left. dumb ass. for the amount people make fun of blonds, sasuke for all his blue black hair is 50x more of an idiot then naruto when it comes down to it.
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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Kakashi...its i would both hate and love to see how iruka would act if he knew that was how kakashi saw him. that he was a think to be protected and couldn't defend himself. i hope iruka surprises him. so iruka will not know whoa kakashi is with his mask being gone. and kakashi will not know iruka who is pretending to be a girl. or he might because his eyes??? i don't know.
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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so i was wrong. iruka did know him...guess we found something kakashi is not great at. does he know who ruka is? iruka likes kakashi!!! i think kakashi might still be in denial.
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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OH NO! Whats iruka going to do with kakashi trying to put the moves on "her". I like the host, she was like don't mess with my girls! So kakashi see's iruka as his. makes since form the staulking. Iruka has a good desguise then, ne? Or maybe it's kakashi underestimating him again. or maybe a little of both. either way i hope you update this story i really want to know what is going to happen. i mean it is so good!!! Please Please Please update! I want to find out what is going to happen. i want kakashi to put the moves on ruka and have her turn him down because iruka will be jealous and mad. PLEASE PLEASE! You're leaving me hanging here.
person Kuromei
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*happy fangirl squee* This story is so good! I want to see what happens next! XD
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story! look forward to reading more! pls update soon!!!
person Hen
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"...he’d stare, but he’d follow up the staring by making sure Iruka knew just exactly who he belonged to and no one else could challenge his claim on the chuunin."

I loved that line! I love possessive Kakashi.
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A slightly psychotic Kakashi and Iruka on a high level mission? Sparklers and fireworks are surely in the making. Yippee!
person hanyou-elf
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you know, this is impressive. i love the way you characterized kakashi. you got the levels of insanity just right and i love it! the way he's concerned about iruka is perfect too. i like that the relationship is going to develop through the story, that it's not something established already. that's a very nice touch.

again, an outstanding job with this story and i look forward to more! update soon!
~hanyou-elf
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty good. *nodnod* I look forward to the next chapter.