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for Insomnia

by RotSeele

person Twiggies
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!
Really hot. ;D
Poor Neji though, Gaara entered him without preparation. xD
Good that he enjoyed it anyways.
It was really sexy!

I'm also glad that Neji is improving. He doesn't need anybody to guide him or anything.
He does fine by himself.

I can't wait to read more!
This chapter was really hot, I wonder what happens in the next. ;D
Keep writing and update soon again!
person HannaFO
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Preety harsh play :D Awesome chapter!!!
person HannaFO
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww he's loosing his hair!? But i love his hair :F Great chapter :D
person Twiggies
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!
Oh, Neji's so fiery for a blind man.
He even argues with the Kazekage. xD
Loving it.

I hope you keep writing adn update soon again!
I want to read more about those two's fights and bickering.
person HannaFO
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your such a tease... i wanna see the reason he wouldn't be walking XDXD Thanks for the update!!
person LadyWolf
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Moree!!!! I missed this one@!!!!!
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A very good story so far. I really have enjoyed these first chapters. Is that nut job still in the loose and if so is he going to come back??
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:D Hinata and Naruto are wise cookies. Momogi is adorable... I don't blame Neji for thinking what he does, because he's not technically wrong. Still. He's not weak- just out of practice. I like how you're conveying emotions and how uncomfortable and footless it is for him... feeling left out?
I'll be waiting to see how this continues. ^^ Thank you for the update.
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, not bad at all. I like it, but I feel bad for Neji becoming blind. I hope he will be alright.

HOpe you update.
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done....I like how Neji isn't bouncing back too fast. My question is, in this series, is Naruto going to find love? It seems like he's always alone.