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for Insomnia

by RotSeele

person Twiggies
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, it's so good that Neji's having some vacation and space to practise his other senses.
He is doing quite well already. xD
I hope Gaara didn't get too mad when he accidentally dropped the..something? xD A vase? jar? Anyway.

Really good fic!
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL I wasn't sure about this fic when I frist found it, and didn't finsh it the first time I read it. But than I found some of your other works, and figered out it was a fic conected to this one...so I gave it anther shot, and now that I read all the chaps you have up so far for it, I LOVE IT! I really like how you ending the last chapp, "If Gaara found out what Naruto was trying to do, he’d never be found. After all, the desert is a very big place." I love that. I chocked on my drink, when I read it. It was good punch line. You have alot of those in your fics, I am finding out, slowly but surely. So ya, my point being, I like this story, and other that you have writen. I am adding you to my Auther favs list. You are that good, at lest in my persnole view. I hope you updat soon. On any of your storys. I am looking fowered to what happens next in them. Great Work! ^___^
person Faifruit
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just started reading this and I couldn't stop reading it! Like a book you can't put away!

I love how Neji is reacting - I'm glad he's stayed in character even as his life gets royally screwed up. I mean, the angst is actually believable in your fic! Thank you for that!

I also want to say that I think the story really picks up and feels real in the most recent chapters (IV and V, specifically) because it's got more dialogue between the characters. I hope that pattern keeps going. I really feel for your Neji when I'm reading him interacting with Hinata, Naruto, etc. And Naruto's just darn cute whenever he opens his idiotic mouth. <3

So I'm looking forward to your next update and I can't wait to have Gaara more involved.
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*snickering* I love Naruto. He's a devious little fellow... who uses his powers for good and for lulz.
person Twiggies
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwh.
Good that Neji finally got out of the house.
Naruto's so friendly.
So, is Neji permanently blind or is he going to heal?
Each of them is just as exciting. xD

I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:D!
Aw, Naruto is... Naruto. XD What a goober, and we love him for it. I love his rationale against being punished- they'll let him get away with this because they don't want him BACK! ^^ Very cute.

I was pleased to see this updated! ^^ Thanks for a new chapter.
person Twiggies
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God.
Poor Neji. Actually I love the blind Neji.. somehow. xD
I loved this chapter! It was great.
Gaara was so kind. I hope we'll be seeing him more in the future.
I also loved the fact that Neji didn't know that is was Gaara who had comforted him earlier, and that he was the one that actually saved him.

Great story!
I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!
I hope you update soon again. Keep writing!
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
But...but...but!
Damn, this is just a great detail to the story but is still sad and...wow!
I just want to know more, I like the sotry, really!
Could you update faster next time, please?
Ja ne!
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was pleased to see this had been updated- you've caught my interest, though I don't know why... well, yes, I do know why- I want to see what happens! ^^;

Thanks for sharing, and for updating.
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Emotional, but too short!!! Thank you for updating, but please do so again soon.