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June 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was a beautifully written story. The scenes flowed wonderfully, without any unnecessary descriptions. You truly have a talent. The interaction between Naruto/Iruka was absolutely precious! I bow to a great writer.
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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome story, awesome prosaics! Pure poetry. Especially the last sentence. gorgeous. :D
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August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay! i'm both happy and sad that this story has ended! ^-^
it was really cute! XD
it was really cute! XD
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August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was truly a good story and i really liked the ending. will their be a sequel telling of their adventures in paradise. nice job and i hope to read more of your work.
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August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
and you ended it with Mpreg!! Oh, how lovely XDDD
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August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Happy endings for all but Mizuki. Yay!
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August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aaaccckk this is sooo good I must have more, so is Mitzuki dead or will he pop up later and who will they meet next, and how will Naruto be the one to lead them to peace and safety? Oh this is soo good I cant wait to read more, it is on my faves so I hope to read losts more soon, ty for the wonderful read, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.O wow this fic is awesome XDD the story line is so good and I just loved the way your Iruka and Kakashi interacted with each other :D not to mention your Naruto is adorable :) and that lemon in the last chapter was <333 XDD very yummy ;) well can't wait for the next chapter 8D
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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The lemon was absolutely hot! I'm glad I read this! Great job so far..very intriguing and definitely pulls you in.
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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love this chapter so much!!!! thanks so much!!! so yummy! XD
and i'm looking happily for the next chapter very much! ^^
and i'm looking happily for the next chapter very much! ^^