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for La Speranza Ultima

by RotSeele

person Vesca
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YOU ROCK MY S0X0RZ!! OMG.. you just gave us a lovely hot chapter of Kakairu smut.. I feel like you gifted this just to me... *snuggles teh chapter*
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woo Hoo!!

This was a very exciting chapter. So much going on, lotsa drama, and a happy ending too! Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up teh great work!
person RyuEarth
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay update! thank you! thank you! thank you!
there are 2 things that i really hope for, 1 mizuki is really dead (though i have a feeling that he can survive a head crash into a boulder) and 2 smut in the next chapter (i really hope that happens!)
love this chapter so much! it was so good! XD
person nawatia
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Iruka is saved! Please tell me you have the next chapter done and will post soon!!!! Cliffie! Bad Cliffie!
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a really good story after reading the story so far i was really hooked. i can't wait to see the next chapter.
person RyuEarth
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
no!!!!! why oh why did this chapter have to end with a cliffhanger???? T_T
this chapter was great!!!!!! i'll be waiting for the next one! thanks so much for the update! XD
person nawatia
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely love the story so far, but I have a question on chapter 10 (I think) - If they were headed to the same destination, why did they separate? It was a cute parting tho...
person RyuEarth
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i am liking this so far! i especially love the kakashi and iruka moments!
and i wonder, is iruka special somehow? it makes me curious to see how things will continue on! XD
person leanne
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it a lot! Look forward to future updates. What an amazing story! :D
person nawatia
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad that you are continuing this story! Keep going!