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for La Speranza Ultima

by RotSeele

person hanyou-elf
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the lord of the forest, ne? this is looking really, really good and i really can not wait until the next chapter. i'm curious how kakashi's going to play into this and naruto as well. i'm so glad it was sarutobi that found him, that makes me happy. keep up the great work and update soon!
~hanyou-elf
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good start! I really can't wait to see where you go with this one and who it was that picked up Iruka.

I'll be looking forward to the next update!!

Ezzy
person hanyou-elf
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow. i really don't have much to say in regards to the start of this story but that i would love to see how you develop this story. i'm really interested in seeing how you flesh iruka out as an adult, as an older character, especially in regards to his past. i'm also very curious, are the hands, sarutobi-sensei? *hopes so*

well, there's not that much to say yet, but i am excited to know what happens next and do hope you'll update this story soon!

keep it up!
~hanyou-elf