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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, interesting crime/drama plot involving the Uchiha boys. Please continue!
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a very interesting start!
I can't wait to know what happens next and what Itachi's motives really are (also how Itachi and Sasuke will interact, hoho). I liked the atmosphere in your fanfiction, where all the homicide and murder are really Not Pretty, it gives a more realistic feel. I was also giving you my fangirl squeals at the scene where Sasuke was sleeping and Itachi kissing him xD. I thought your OCs were OK as well.
Oh, and although this will probably focus on Sasuke and Itachi, I hope there'll be some Kakashi, Naruto, and Sakura! Since, you know, this is what you say is your first serious plot (not that I didn't like your other fics, I loved them! You're one of my fav authors), I think it'd be cool to see how they interact with Sasuke or how they contribute in Sasuke's mission to catch Itachi. But of course, that's all up to you! =3 And I guess I'll be happy no matter what you decide to give your readers anyway! xD
So, the conclusion to that was I definitely think you should continue, and this certainly shouldn't be just to collect pixelated dust on MSWord. xD Keep up the good work! =)
I can't wait to know what happens next and what Itachi's motives really are (also how Itachi and Sasuke will interact, hoho). I liked the atmosphere in your fanfiction, where all the homicide and murder are really Not Pretty, it gives a more realistic feel. I was also giving you my fangirl squeals at the scene where Sasuke was sleeping and Itachi kissing him xD. I thought your OCs were OK as well.
Oh, and although this will probably focus on Sasuke and Itachi, I hope there'll be some Kakashi, Naruto, and Sakura! Since, you know, this is what you say is your first serious plot (not that I didn't like your other fics, I loved them! You're one of my fav authors), I think it'd be cool to see how they interact with Sasuke or how they contribute in Sasuke's mission to catch Itachi. But of course, that's all up to you! =3 And I guess I'll be happy no matter what you decide to give your readers anyway! xD
So, the conclusion to that was I definitely think you should continue, and this certainly shouldn't be just to collect pixelated dust on MSWord. xD Keep up the good work! =)
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So one of my favorite, favorite authoresses has updated or created another story and I am in love with you all over again. My passion is AU and itachi/sasuke and you have brought them here in a wonderful story. I can't wait to read more, literally. So, please continue with this wonderful creation and I look forward to it more than you can imagine!!