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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so sad!!! please please make it a two shoot. sasuke needs naruto
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July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please please please write a second! This is very bitter-sweet and lovely...
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July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was great! i want naruto to live ^_^ please make it a two-shot
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June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
;___; It's so sad but sweet.
I felt really sad for Sasuke and Naruto at the end of the story. Sasuke finally said the words Naruto wanted to hear, only he didn't hear them.
Please write a second part/sequel. I'm a sucker for happy endings, so I really want to see Naruto wake up and for them to get together again.
I felt really sad for Sasuke and Naruto at the end of the story. Sasuke finally said the words Naruto wanted to hear, only he didn't hear them.
Please write a second part/sequel. I'm a sucker for happy endings, so I really want to see Naruto wake up and for them to get together again.
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June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg i almost cried, that was good.
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June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Does Naruto wake up?!
Please update this!
Please update this!
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June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great! Please, make this to be a two-shot!
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was so sad!!!! I loved the lemon and also how Sasuke told Naruto he loved him and begged him to come back. I also love how he wouldn't leave Naruto alone and wouldn't allow them to pull the plugs on him. I hope at the end that Naruto was waking up!! If that is true, it would be wonderful if you could post one more chapter to show him waking up and for Sasuke to tell him he loves him and will give up Itachi for him, while Naruto is awake and can hear it. Wonderful story!! :)
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well, sasuke and naruto got at it quick...like they were keepin respective space and then 5 minutes later thier having a party in the bed ;)
but man, that was a ...Terrific story! well, it was a sad one to a point i nearly cried, but awsome none the less. there has to be more! you cna't leave something like that at a cliffy and expect us not to beg for more!! well, n-eways it was a great read keep up the good work...
but man, that was a ...Terrific story! well, it was a sad one to a point i nearly cried, but awsome none the less. there has to be more! you cna't leave something like that at a cliffy and expect us not to beg for more!! well, n-eways it was a great read keep up the good work...
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
In regards to: Tolazytosignin
First off, I don’t think that you’re a b***** lol.
Secondly, I did say that there were probably some mistakes in the story. I don’t have a BETA after all.
And third, Yes. I was somewhat (picture) inspired by a Doujinshi that I looked at a while back. I can’t read Japanese fluently though --only names and greetings and really easy words-- so I didn’t know what was going on for the most part. (cluless o.O) I got the impression that Sasuke some how hurt his eyes and then he was mad at Naruto for something...
And not that I need to explain myself, but when I sat down to write this story, my inspiration was to produce something really depressing and my idea’s came from a lot of different places, not just one. Some of them were from things that I’d written in the past (published and personal) and others were inspired from outside influences, but nothing so significant that I would need to give credit for it. The theme for this story was that Naruto loved Sasuke so much, that he would do anything for him; even if what he did unintentional hurt Sasuke in the end. (because Naruto has a big heart, but he doesn’t always think things through) And I like to make my stories realistic, so yeah, they lived together (not uncommon for best friends) they were in ANBU (it makes sense why Sasuke overused his Sharingan) Naruto loves Sasuke (the point of the story) Naruto tries to blind Sasuke because he was tired of watching Sasuke slowly kill himself (twisted love and Naruto’s impulsive need to help other people) Naruto jumps off the building (because he thinks it’s the only way to save Sasuke)
If there is a dounjishi out there like this, then WOW, that’s just weird…
Still, I can post a disclaimer if you think that I’ve taken someone else story. I don’t think I have. But whatever...
First off, I don’t think that you’re a b***** lol.
Secondly, I did say that there were probably some mistakes in the story. I don’t have a BETA after all.
And third, Yes. I was somewhat (picture) inspired by a Doujinshi that I looked at a while back. I can’t read Japanese fluently though --only names and greetings and really easy words-- so I didn’t know what was going on for the most part. (cluless o.O) I got the impression that Sasuke some how hurt his eyes and then he was mad at Naruto for something...
And not that I need to explain myself, but when I sat down to write this story, my inspiration was to produce something really depressing and my idea’s came from a lot of different places, not just one. Some of them were from things that I’d written in the past (published and personal) and others were inspired from outside influences, but nothing so significant that I would need to give credit for it. The theme for this story was that Naruto loved Sasuke so much, that he would do anything for him; even if what he did unintentional hurt Sasuke in the end. (because Naruto has a big heart, but he doesn’t always think things through) And I like to make my stories realistic, so yeah, they lived together (not uncommon for best friends) they were in ANBU (it makes sense why Sasuke overused his Sharingan) Naruto loves Sasuke (the point of the story) Naruto tries to blind Sasuke because he was tired of watching Sasuke slowly kill himself (twisted love and Naruto’s impulsive need to help other people) Naruto jumps off the building (because he thinks it’s the only way to save Sasuke)
If there is a dounjishi out there like this, then WOW, that’s just weird…
Still, I can post a disclaimer if you think that I’ve taken someone else story. I don’t think I have. But whatever...