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person Apple
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Just found this story today and I must say I've been enjoying every chapter and can't wait for the next! This is my first venture into seme Kakashi and I can't believe how much I love him that way. I vote for Seme Kakashi to stay. For some reason I don't feel that Iruka's...condition...can really be satisfied with thrusting into his lover. I like that Kakashi is having so much fun with his ideas!
person Hen
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter! Personally, I prefer Kakashi to always be the seme. It just suits him better.
person Anise
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was just so hot, it's always fun to have toys thrown into the games!
I so hope that Iruka jumps Kakashi I've always thought of them as the kind of guys who would switch in a relationship, even if you think they prefer certain positions Iruka's got such a dominating (and strong) streak in him I can't help but think every now and then he's going to pin Kakashi to the bed and have his wicked way with him ;) Plus I think that Kakashi is easygoing enough that if he's getting sex he doesn't care who's doing what, as long as it's Iruka he's doing it with! :)
person SemeUke
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dom: Noooo to Iruka!seme. I get it, he's a man and men like to stick their penis into things. But Iruka is under some heavy voodoo! He needs to be filled! Beads, dildos, vibrators, fingers, cocks, and tongues! He needs it all! I think Kakashi should come back to find that...no, Iruka couldn't escape the room, but there are jounin pawing at the door...and hell, if Kakashi could make a clone why can't Iruka? And surely, in all Kakashi's wisdom, he would have a double ended dildo in his little box of fun right? How horny would Iruka have to be to use it? I'm sure Kakashi wouldn't mind watching as Iruka doubled his pleasure....
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo not a cliffy!! >_< evil your so evil. I hope Iruka jumps kakashi once he enters the door lol. at the end i really want tsunade and genma to be waiting outside and kakashi open the door out of breath and sweaty as he say s"mission acomplished!" and faints. im such a naughty naughty fangirl. thank you ^_^
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Jump Kakashi, jump Kakashi. Let him suffer, well no, I mean it's not like he'll really be suffering but...
Oh, you know what I mean.
person Jirian
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Inner!Jirian:"O.O NOOOO I WANA SEE WHAT HAPPENS...might as well wait TT.TT *5 secs later* GRR WHEN WILL THIS CHAPTER POP UP!" eh ty for righting and sorry for the rudeness *glares at inner!jirian* *sitin in corner sulking* aww im sorry *gives hug* ANYWAY back to what i was gona say ...good story ive been reading so far this story rocks cant wait to get the next chapter!
Love
Jirian
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Inner!Jirian
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
o_o I bow before your greatness oh smuty diety of awsomeness! i-i-i'm just in awe. I mean kakashi is hot and iruka is hot and their hot together...and CLONES! i just dont know what to say except TEACH ME!
person lo
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is still a lot of fun to read.
person Hen
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This just keeps getting hotter and hotter!