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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fun, but don't let the sex scene go stale.
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome Awesome Awesome story!!!!!! Please more!!!
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wah! an evil cliffhanger! can't wait for the next chapter!
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Three weeks! We can't wait that long! This is too good!
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was cute, lets see what you can do with this.
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"... what with your extensive…knowledge… of the…relevant… topic, and your… familiarity with Iruka.”
i had this perfect image of genma fumbling for the 'proper' words, eyes sliding to the hokage to see if she was going to be offended by any of it XD
funny, sweet, well written! i always knew if iruka got loose the whole village would suffer blood loss XD
i had this perfect image of genma fumbling for the 'proper' words, eyes sliding to the hokage to see if she was going to be offended by any of it XD
funny, sweet, well written! i always knew if iruka got loose the whole village would suffer blood loss XD
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are the epitomy of evil. You creat a scene filled with the most intrueging images building expectation and and anticipation and then...
You leave! For nearly a month. That is evil, very, very, very evil. You had better have wonderfully long, intriquite, descriptive chapters in future or you will be hunted down and punished, severely.
You leave! For nearly a month. That is evil, very, very, very evil. You had better have wonderfully long, intriquite, descriptive chapters in future or you will be hunted down and punished, severely.
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
X_x.
::nosebleed.::
...you should update. soon! <333
::nosebleed.::
...you should update. soon! <333
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaahhhhh this is too good...um excuse the cliche`but yeah. Your gonna update soon right?