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January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohh~ thats nice. The writing and grammar were a little rough but the over all effect was lovely <3
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehe.. nice one. sasuke is such a whore for power.
kyuubi and naruto make one hell of double team. I hope you continue with this.. and even if you don't, this would be and excellent oneshot. ^^
kyuubi and naruto make one hell of double team. I hope you continue with this.. and even if you don't, this would be and excellent oneshot. ^^
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, i liked SOOOOOOOOOO much! What would it take for u to continue this? or if not continueing, at least making another story with the same pairing! *puppy dog eyes* pweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeze? O_O
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay - i'm totally digging the plot-line. it's curious and creative. i would suggest a beta reader so that small things like grammar and punctuation do not detract from the story as they do now.
if you do not have one yet, i'm fine with beta-ing for you until you find one.
other than that - I like it so far and certainly hope you continue!
if you do not have one yet, i'm fine with beta-ing for you until you find one.
other than that - I like it so far and certainly hope you continue!