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for Long Vacation

by Yum2

person Memphis Atari
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto, jilted on the most happiest day of his life. Would like to see more please.
person jelliott
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm always one to jump on a good ItaNaru when I see it. There aren't enough, in my humble opinion. As for the story I think this was a great start and I liked the fact that you spent time to establish Naruto's feelings. I'm very interested in seeing where this is going and will look forward to the next update.

~Jae
person Anaheyla
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn you, Sakura! Damn you to the darkest pits of the deepest hells!

Poor Naruto. :(