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January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This story is so different. I love the cryptic mythology that surrounds the Uchiha brothers and their cat servant Kakashi. Its very interesting. I wonder what exactly Naruto is, and why he has to endure his indentured servitude first, prior to receiving the answers to his questions. I can only assume its because he'll end up discovering his identity through these tasks and come to accept them, so that when the truth is revealed, it will actually make sense. Then again, agreeing blindly like that, he could be subjecting himself to YEARS of debt. Considering the mythological implications, that could mean centuries, rather than decades. O_O
Of course, I could be looking to much into this. Heh. Keep up the good work with the story. I'm looking forward to its continuation. :)
Of course, I could be looking to much into this. Heh. Keep up the good work with the story. I'm looking forward to its continuation. :)
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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great start! This story is fantastic! you've created a mysterious atmosphere and itachi and sasuke perfectly fit in this place! Poor naruto, he always has to face hardships, hasn't he? I wonder what naruto want from the brothers?
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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now i know what that story reminds me of: xxxholic! it's a really great manga! it's a really good idea to rewrite it with naruto characters! though i never would have imagined itachi in yuuko's shoes but, hey, he is great like that! And the copycat nin is really a cat, so great, i love this kakashi! I wonder why sasuke feels like naruto is bad omen and why itachi made him work for the shop? Is naruto someone like xxxholic's watanuki? I hope so! It's great to see the blond dobe in another role than the loudmouthed idiot! He seems so sad and empty! I hope itachi and sasuke find how to fix his problems... I hope it will be more sasunaru than itanaru but the 2 are good so please keep going! <3
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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
coool, yet creepy. kinda like twilight zone ... definitely piques the curiousity. if you do emails for updates, mine is above.
looking forward to the next installment!
looking forward to the next installment!
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June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmmm, was the killer (driver) Itachi? naaaaaaah, that can't be it. um, *scratches head thoughtfully*, ????? is that even important to the story? it's gonna bug me though...long black hair...Orochimaru? yeah! It's gotta be him! RIGHT? wrong?... update soon!
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am intrigued. Please continue.
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this. It is intriguing, a little confusing too but left me wanting to know more. I look forward to your next update.