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for Witch

by scribblexdie

schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is so cool. This story has so much promise. I hope you update.
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a very good chapter i loved how you explained the faries
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liky hurry and update please
person kai
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
they talk funny...i like it, its old english ne,im surprised itachi helped them so fast i thought hed be much more reluctant or make it harder at least teasingly. and what about kiba will naruto ever see his friend again?
keep it up cant wait to find out what happens next.
person VRon8899
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooh cute ^_^; hope for more!! hehe
person Zaile
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story is interesting ... and original :P
I liked the idea of making Saduke the witch and not Naruto like I originaly though it would be.
I can't wait for next chapter!!
person oDesperadoSweetieo
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I like the different POVs.

I look forward to your next update.
person Chibi-chan D.J.
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOhh, I like this story alot so far. It just goes to show just how ignorant people really were back then. So we should thank God we weren't born in Salem back then O.O! Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to the next chapter :D!
person littleolmee
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well this is an interesting concept for a story you got going here. Loved the fact Sasuke was actually the witch. Had he done anything to the townspeople? This woman who accused Naruto of hurting her daughter, did Sasuke have anything to do with that or just hysterical people blaming problems on others? Sasuke saving Naruto and whizzing right past the townspeople was a great touch. Just what is Sasuke's intentions towards Naruto and how is he going to react when he finds out a real witch saved him. Naruto certainly can never return to that town now. Well thanks for sharing your story, hope you stick with it. I'll keep an eye out for your story. Take care.
person chineseartist
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ha ha, sasuke's a witch! i love it.