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Interesting Plot you have developing here. I can't wait for your next update, this fic has caught my attention......

Excellent story so far! You have a great plot, everyone stays in character and gah! I can't wait to read more!

I cannot tell you the extent of my giggles when I saw this was up and then getting to read it... um hum... again... was spectacular because this chapter is so damn intense and just WOW!!!
Yay... you are BACK, baby!

Nice!

wow! and i thought i had read everything worth reading on this site! i was hooked right from the first setence. XD the character development is brilliant..and im actually a little scared of sasuke! i think you've made him more formidable than in the manga.. im really looking fwd to the naruto-sasuke interactions..that should be very intersting..hehe. though how exactly you're going to get them together.. i have no clue.! which i like! yay!
though there is one thing i would like to mention.. i found that your chapters have one too many LONG paragraphs.. especially when it comes to the format of this site.. it makes it very difficult to read. i found myself wanting to skim ( but i didnt :D) throo the para's because it required a tad too much of concentration. i think it would be an easier read it you broke down those long para's.
other than that.. kudos for an amazing AU story. looking fwd to your next update~

I love this story, please continue it. I just love this plot and will be hoping for update. Please please continue.

*grins* Nice to know there is another author out there who likes math. (I've been doing Calculus since my sophmore year in high school.) I seriously thought for a while that all writers didn't like math.... or at least they don't like learning it, or writing about it; and then it reflects in their characters and stories..... Oh well, this paragraph is completely off topic.

Now onto what I think of your current chapter:
You are, as far as I can tell, keeping the characters in character to a tee. Man, I wish I could write in character as well as you do. I liked how you pulled out the extremes of the characters personatlities in this chapter. Like the cold, annoyed attitude Saske has with Sakura. "There is no other woman."..... Honestly I'm surprised that she hasn't figured it out, because she actually is a smart person; but, at the same time, I recognize that she is blind when it comes to Sasuke and is in complete denial about his sexuality.

It was a little confusing when reading the whole Takahara mental-scenes/flash-back area, because I didn't intially get that that wasn't what was happening chronologically in the story..... It could've been indicated a bit better. However, once I understood that that was what happened, the light bulb went on,and remained on.

Also, I really liked the ending to the phone conversation with Sakura.... The combination between Takahara and her made a really nice effect that I find amazing to read. It was obvious who was saying what, but at the same time, it was indifferentialable what they were saying, because it was the same thing except with different situations. Bravo.

I already have a pretty good idea as to who the new neighbors, but other than that, I'm guessing as to where you're going to take this plot. Keep up the excellent work.

So exacting! I do feel sorry for Sakura, though.
Great work, I like this story.

Thanx! I like my name too! XD I totally feel you on the review thing, I know I should review more...

I think this was appropriately titled. Wow Orochimaru is one sick motha! And that Makayla wants to get in his pants?! Ha! she doesn't know how lucky she was... Though, Sasuke's no angle either. I can't believe he cut that guy's fingers off! Yuck! I feel bad for him(Not Sasuke, Takahara) Dude, I'm so excited for the next chapter, Neighbors?!

Peace,
Aeryss

Oh yeah, my email is eryn1985@hotmail.com. Update me please :)