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I've been reading this again...... I really like your writing style and as I said earlier your work really intrigues me. I'd be willing to beta for you if you wish, however sometimes it might take me a day or two longer to get back to you. Well, if you decide you need my help, let me know at dreams2bdecided@gmail.com .

Sorry to hear of your problems. I hope they mix themselves soon. Until then I'll wait for the next chapter.
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awesome!
update, soon~!

Congradulations..... you have me intriuged by your plot. It is very rare for me to find a good thriller fanfic that I haven't already figured out what will happen by now. I like their code names. Most of them make sense to me, but I haven't seen much of the show. I found the precautions for Sasuke's safe to be humorous in a way, but at the same time extremely effective. I also like the character development that you have going so far, because most people assume that you know the characters right off the bat and dive in; and then there's people like me who are going now why did that character take that act again.

To be honest though, I think it's kind of risky making Orochimaru Sakura's father, but it will be interesting to know where the story goes with that, and I have a feeling that you will make it all work out.

However, it's stories like these that make my favorites list, because they are well written and thought out and they manage to hold my interest longer than my math problems. (Just so it's clear, I'm a math enthusist.) I am looking foward to your next chapter so post soon.

I was all "yay a new chapter!" and then it turns out it was only the edited version...*sigh*
Well, it didn't hurt to re-read your excellent writing ;-)
I can't wait to read more, I really love this story.

Intriguing! I like this story because it has a really well thought-out plot. I mean, it goes without saying that most fangirls (and boys!) like smut and PWP (LOL) but a good plot always brings out that extra something from a fic that makes it so much more enjoyable to read. Great work! I hope to see another update from you soon!

PS - Don't worry about the email thing (you emailed me), I can't think of another reason for the place to put in your email other than for the author to possibly contact a reviewer. So long as you don't spam me to death or something, it's cool. ^^

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if you didnt plan on continuing to read a certain story, would you review it?

This was freaking amazing. I was a bit unsure after reading the summaty, but I am ever so glad I decided to read it. This story is a true gem among the Naruto fanfictions and I really hope you'll update soon.
Just one tiny thing, some of the paragraphs were too long, my eyes started to hurt reading them.

well, i came and read the fic, just like i promised you, and it was great! i'd either forgotten or didn't get around to reading chapter three, so i loved the reactions to naruto's pic. i flipped out the first time i saw it on the anime, so i'm glad someone bothered to put it in a fic. can't wait to see what everyone gets up to in the next chapter. good job and good luck.

Ok, so I have two things to say:

I never review, I’m like the queen of lurkers, but I gotta say that I adore your writing style and love this story. I personally like to see what’s going on with everyone else, it fills in the plot, besides why would you introduce all those people, just to ignore them. Oh and I too LOVE your Sasuke! He is such a cold bastard.

Now my next thing. –bristle- WTH?! I have read many authors talk about this but I have never actually seen it until now. How does somebody tell somebody else what to write and how to write it? Write your own story if you don’t like it! Writing is an expression of self, its supposed to liberate you so how are you going to tell someone how to express themselves?

Please don’t conform to one person’s personal preferences. A lot of readers, myself included, like this story the way it is.

Peace,

Aeryss