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for They Are Just the Cleaners

by Raina

person Lila
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome and very deserving of the five star rating it receives......I mean that not too many stories deserve that rating but yours does truly exceptional......I didn't stop until i got to this latest chapter and i can't wait for the next update XD
person Lynn
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man this story is SO good! I am actually surprised you don't have more reviews. I love your plot, it's so interesting and Sasuke and Suigetsu? That explains the scratches on his back, so I guess it wasn't another woman like Sakura thought. Ok and LOL at Kabuto calling him a bitch! You got me so interested in this, I hope you update soon, this story is like a diamond in the rough!

Lynn
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter!! So is Sasuke's marriage to Sakura just a front for him? I can't wait until Naruto and Sasuke meet!! :D
person Word_Slave
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic!! Please add more soon, but I'm having a heck of a time trying to figure out just how you're going to redeem Sasuke.
More please
Slave
person Chria
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I'm glad I made your day! For bringing us novel quality work (and quickly) you deserve to be sung praises. I gotta say so much is happening at once it's making my head spin. I'm glad you mainly focused on Sasuke's conversation mission plus threw a bit of smex in there. I've never heard “Take what you want” in that context before. It really brought out Suigetsu’s bitterness. Meh, he deserves it if he's going to act like a slut and be that easy. (Not to mention be an idiot to expect softness from Sasuke. Retard.) All Sasuke did was walk through the damn door and he's already getting head. HAHAHA Funny, when I phrase it like that. I ‘m dying to know what’s in the red envelope if it’s making Orochimaru sweat. Definitely something good. I wouldn’t mind if he did die in the next chapter because nothing gets under my skin like pedophiles. Actually, I’m hoping he does because you have such a deliciously gory raw writing style. Yum.
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... so much detail. I love your characterizations and I love your Sasuke. He's so... cold and HOT. I'm looking forward to more Team FoxFang... they should be a blast. Can't wait to see what their mission is! Although, I may have a few guesses.
person Chria
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a gem! Love every word! Orochimaru as Sakura's father?! Gasp! That's new and cool.
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL at Naruto's graduation picture!! I laughed so hard at that part! I'm really liking this story! :)
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far! I love this plot, it is so mysterious! And the way you potray all the characters, is fantastic! I can't wait for more and see what happens next!
person Meep
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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let a tailor take care of your dresses! its the cloth that costs the most (normally, although the one who tailored my prom dress was the mother of an old friend of mine and neighbour so maybe I did get a slight discount...) and a professional will be able to come up with plenty of ideas you might not have even thought of!
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Well, I dont know anything about you (maybe you're a tailor yourself or something), but... i liked the story and I was dissapointed with the fact that it only had 3 chapters seeing I want to read more so...
well...
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*Cry*
its not often you see the characters being in character. normally in fics like these naruto finds sasuke absolutely gorgeous and doesnt care about sakura at all (for example) and small things like that can annoy anyone (even if they hpapen to love yaoi, yes, its just idiots who like when you jump into action head on without even regarding the characters normal thinking) ._.

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*imagines that naruto would try to infiltrate by flirting with sakura when sasuke comes back* ._. that would be fun :0