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Hehehehe.
As a writer, wrath has always been my favorite of the sins.
And now for the disturbing part... something like this actually happened to me once...
Naturally I wasn't a ninja (EMT), but our next meeting was very... awkward.
Excellent work. I look forward to the last chapter!!
CD

lol i can understand why wrath is next. Kakashi has yet to finally complete his mission of bedding sakura. that has got to be frustrating especially when he was sooooo close. poor kakashi...sigh...i'll guess he'll just have to be content with me. lol

Very good 2 chapters. Hope you add the next bits soon.

Wonderfully written. Cant wait for another chapter.

Oh that was good, great writing! please continue soon!

This is going great! It's so hard to fine decent fics on this site and yours is one of the few that make visiting this place worthwhile. XD I love your characterisations and the idea of sin theme for each chapter. So we've had Lust and Envy and soon we'll have Pride. Then Wrath, Sloth, Greed, and Gluttony. I'm looking forward to seeing how you work those themes into this story! I imagine Gluttony will be a tough one (Kakashi, perhaps, comfort eating his woes away? XD)I'm loving it so far, but there's the occasionally slip in narrative where it goes from "I" to "Kakashi". Not a huge problem (I do it all the time in my 1st person narrative fics) but that's the only technical fault I can find if not the only fault, period. This is a very good quality story, please keep it up and make me the happiest girl in the internets! :3

noooo sakura come back its kakashi for heavens sakes!!!! is she stupid or something? i mean common KAKASHI!!!! the hottie of all hotties!!!!!!!!! >_< i wanna cry!

I love this story! Kakashi/Sakura is my favorite pairing and I think you're doing a great job with the dialogue and the plot. I look forward to the next chapter.

That was really good. I can't wait til the next updates.
Rox

I thought this was really well-written. A lot of the fanfics have all the sexual stuff without any good grammar or story. I like how you are giving a lot of build-up to what could happen, and character depth. Good job!