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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow
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July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome awesome awesome update soon keep up the good work
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July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That's an excellent start! I can't wait to read more. =)
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July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Veeeery nice! Looking forward to the next installment! :3
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June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like the premise of this story but i was surprised it began with lust. It makes me wonder what the sin will be when they finally get it on
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June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great work! Thank you for the chapter, and I look forward to more. You do extremely well at drawing the reader in. =)
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June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter your writing is so amazing. So who is Kakashi going to envy Naruto, Saskue, Sai...Genma?!?
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June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is good! Continue with it!!