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for Sharp Angles

by Raina

schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent use of 'Creep' scattered through out the story. Normally I hate "song fics," but this one was just so well done that I have to say I was impressed. The lyrics and the chorus played out right into the story and as a sort of a meta afterthought to catagorize their fealings. I loved it.

Keep up the good work. I'd like to see more stories from you. ^^
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, this story is kick-ass! I Can't wait for you to continue it!

Good luck and much love!
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
-flails- Yay! This story makes me happy. I love how you have described their thoughts and reactions, especially Sakura's. You made her human with the way that she reacts and how her morals finally kick in at the end. I am also loving how well you've kept them all in character. <3 and hugs for you!
person VRon8899
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow...that was pretty intense..I love how it was written! Beautifully done!! ^_^;