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October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! I was so happy to see that you're writing again! I really did miss your work and hope to see more soon :)
I loved Tsunade's introduction in this chapter and I think you're doing a pretty damn good job of keeping the characters in character. I really can't wait to see what you do with the chapters to come and what all the pairings will eventually be.
Great job and I look forward to more!
Ezri-Candy
I loved Tsunade's introduction in this chapter and I think you're doing a pretty damn good job of keeping the characters in character. I really can't wait to see what you do with the chapters to come and what all the pairings will eventually be.
Great job and I look forward to more!
Ezri-Candy
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the sound of this fic. I like everything from the plot of the story to the crime team. Can't wait to read on.
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kiba is funny as funny as he was in the first chapter.LOL. I love that you have almost everybody from the series in this. You even have Konohamaru and his gang in it, nice. Can't imagine who the Silver Rider could be.
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You say you don't have any pairings as of yet but I like the way you seemingly paired everyone for the first extent of the investigation. You've got Sasuke and Temari, Lee and Tenten, Gaara and Naruto, Kankurou and Kiba, and Shika and Neji. WOW!!! Those sound pretty good but of course it's only investigation and they'll probably change. I like how Moegi admires or rather idolizes Temari and how Temari's warmed to the fact.
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn!! Sasuke was right about Moegi she's very impressive with gathering the info quickly and having state-of-the-art tech in her possession, quick thinking for her. I thought Ino was going to blow their cover screaming when Sasuke dragged her to interrogation. I really can't wait to see what kinda machine Tsunade will crank out for them. Great chapter!!!!!!!!
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July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is interesting. I'ld liek to know more about the silver rider, why is he/she so infamous. What have they done? Who could it possibly be, I wonder.
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehehe... Give Naruto some coffee!!! I'd love to see him transform into a hyperactive nutjob. ^^
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July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
man i really like this one! it's got me on the edge of my seat already and that's only after 1 chapter. cant wait for more! and for a pairing i suggest hinata/menma (from the filler episode)
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July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This whole story is ridiculus, but a very interesting and enjoyable concept. I like how you made Naruto from Scandinavia, although it would have been funny if you went all out and changed his name from Uzumaki to Uzumaski. ^^ hehe.