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for The Id and the Super-ego

by Adi

person Aingyl
schedule April 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Rofl that was great. Poor Sasuke. He just HAS to get enamored of the worst person ever: the rambunctious, perverted Naruto, who doesn't seem to possess much in the way of self-restraint. Good work!
person DonoOfJV
schedule May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the whole "doing nasty things 'below' the table is a kink of mine and you did an amazing job of satisfying it! <3

I think this was from a previous chapter but I really appreciated the process Sasuke went through to kind of come to terms with his sexuality. It wasn't just his hormones leading him to Naruto. He actually experimented. ^^

Thank you for writing and sharing! <3
person sugar
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ha Ha Ha!!! LOL This has got to be the funniest part of the story. Classic!!!

Naruto nodded his assent. “Okay, blow me,” spoken in all seriousness had it not been for the wide smile that spread across Naruto’s face.



Now presented with the situation that he had desired, Sasuke’s mouth opened and closed a few times, at a loss of what to say.



“Yeah, just like that but around my dick,” Naruto’s scars stretched across his cheeks as he beamed, legs parting, butt wiggling deeper into the sofa.

person whirlpoolfan
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is soooo smexy hilarious
i can't see what could top that pubilc smut!
you really are one of my fav NaruSasu writers
thanxxxxx
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
-“Naruto?”

“Mmm?” Naruto was near sleep now.

“Is that a photocopy of my butt on the wall with a bulls eye painted on it?!” -

..... *glomps* All my friends a-d-o-r-e you and I do too. LOL You make me laugh so much!
person shushu
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sex at the restaurant, yay! XD
This fic is amazing, love it! <3
person sugar
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story I read it twice. Sasuke and Naruto are so cute in this story. FUNNY!! Great writing!!!
person hsbs
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Part 4: from start to finish had ME writhing on my seat, right along with teh uchiha! I'm bookmarking this story for the public smut alone! NICE. HOT.

But again, most importantly, your writing is entertaining, humorous and imaginative.

and did I mention HOT?

::lustfully thrusts against your leg::!
person hsbs
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahhh hahahahaha

Part 1: very entertaining, naruto is the fun!

He drools at Tsunades gigantic boobs!

I think his methods make him an excellent therapist!

/loves
person hsbs
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Part2: hilarious: naruto's random annoyingness: he stuck paper up Shikas nose to gain attention - man what a twerp! And itachi selling himself off as a religious hippie ROFL

And then you tease us with a bit Sasuke stiffy action! you tease! Hahaha 'Root' of the problem.

jaraiya - I just love a dirty old man who lives for big tits! We all know Tsunade wants him to press his face in there and go Brrrrrrr

and then you give us smut-yay! :happy pants:

funny and sexy from start to finish. good work. now onto the next chapter...

yep yep ah hmmmm yep yep