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for The Id and the Super-ego

by Adi

schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hell yes! I want more smexy goodness :D loved the 2nd chapter even more then the first, you should really continue this story :)
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O_O that's lethal... a person really shouldn't read smut of any kind so soon after waking up, it does more damage O_O f*** that was hot... and the bastard just walked away afterwards *blinks* p-r-i-c-k

okay okay, maybe i'm being a little harsh, i can understand sasuke being upset after he found out that naruto was not 'doctor uzumaki' (burst out laughing at that one heh) but...man leaving like that was cold *sigh* but then it is sasuke so looool suits him i guess ^_^ thanks for the update heh I really like this!!!

Hina xXxx
person maruuu
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Totally delicious. I except more smutty scenes in the future:eyebrows: Your writing is very fun and cute:DDD I love this very much;P
person Anon
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
me want more? yes please
person fangirl
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
One: Thank you for the update. Two: THANK YOU for not having Naruto go and write that story...I was so afraid that he would and I honestly can't see anything good happening from that. Three: hehehe...now Naruto has a nice black and white of Sasuke's ass...sweet!!!
And last but not least: YES! WANT MORE! MORE UPDATES!!!
person gabby
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah, that would be soooo nice, and besides that was hott as hell ;) great job, but i still wanna more :( ... u know that u making ppl addicted to ur fanfic, right? hey but who cares just give me MORE... pretty please *puppy eyes*
person kauru_ryu
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O [was hoping the caught by the copier.] LOLz
person kauru_ryu
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
edit: O.O [was hoping the ACTION was caught by the copier] LOLz
person llyoung
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Of course we want more. The copier was a great idea (I wonder what the copy will look like).
person cynaga
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WoW~!