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for The Id and the Super-ego

by Adi

schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes. More, please.
person animehead
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol i love you.

this chapter was beyond funny and hot. silly sasuke you're supposed to be sated after getting a blowjob in a copy room by a sexy blue eyed blond. ha if that's what the kids said on the Trix cereal commericial i would die!!! but that was freaking. i bet if i worked for the paper, the most i'd get is some middleaged bald guy name Dan making passes at me while staring at my breast...

i want to write smut now. it's your fault. stop giving me the urge. i have stuff to do today. XD
person Raina
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dude, you have to continue! That was hilarious and smexy, my two favorite things. I wonder what is going to happen when Sasuke and Tsunade find out Naruto was *ahem* playing doctor. Anyway, that was awesome, I look forward to more.
-Rai
person Kats
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy SHIT!! that was seriously hot, you have to write more!!
person punkin02
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More Please!
*begs shamelessly*
person Haowek
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that chapter made me giggle! You can always count on Naruto to help a fella out with his issues. You pulled off Naruto's competitive nature and obsession with winning rather well as well as Sasuke's silent and brooding thing. Great way to end the chapter off too, though I'm a little anxious to find out what happens in the next chapter. Well, I wouldn't be a very good reader if I didn't get a little agitated at endings like these! The wait always kills me. =] Good luck with the next chapter, I really hope you choose to continue with this story.
person tysonandkai
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was so HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!!! WRITE MORE WRITE MORE!!!!!! but first......... UPDATE CONQUEST PLEASE!!!!!
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MORE! I order you to write more! This was so good. I usualy don't like AU stories but this one is great. ^-^
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes! please update soon!
person Zrina
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are the bestest, Adi! I loved this, but you already knew that!! The whole ninja!Naruto commentary plus the Spice Girls just made it unforgetable, lol!! And, of course, the canoodling was hot!!! Sasu doesn't know how lucky he is to get a piece of the Uzumaki action!! Love it completely!!