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for The Id and the Super-ego

by Adi

schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
teehee, sasuke DID bolt like a startled woodland animal.

why is it so hard to just admit he's gay, and get a good swordfight going, huh?

*sigh* more?
person Mikra
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, do I want more? What a silly question! HELL yes! xD
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
¬.¬ Oi...Wait a minute! Where's my smex!! Whaaaaaaaaaa, you have to write it! You have to write it!! *Falls to the ground and wibbles for yaoi butt-secks*
But damn this story was kool. You write such drool worthy stuff. Can't wait till you update *poke poke* Hurry up, now!!
*Hands you lip balm* Give that to Naru-chan...it'll make things go easier!
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome. I can't wait to read more, and can't wait for Tsunade to catch Naruto :)
person Leila
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'd love to read more, I wan to find out what happens between those two!! I have to say I think Naruto is going to get seriously hurt when Sasuke finds out he wasn't really a doctor!! Hope there is more^_^
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I do.
person DowntownWoman
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOTT!!!!! I want more, please.
person kai
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what will sasuke think when he finds out naruto wasnt his doctor? thatll be great to see.hope you diside to continue this its great and interesting, wonder what he said to sakura while she was zoned out, oh well guess well never know
ne.good luck

~kai
person Allys
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL Adi who knew you were such a tease XD? Want more? ;). I still really love this. Huggles. I just wanted to say Hi! And that the kissing scene was Hott XD. I love that the bastard said it did nothing at all and then prepared to be attacked and molested XD. All Naruto needed to do else was whip out Tsuande's important docs XD. :huggles:
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay...according to my vague and skewed understanding of the human psyche, I'd say that Naruto is the Id, and Sasuke is the Super-ego. One wants, and the other limits. Sound right to you? Anyway, it's cute. Hate to see what happens when Mr. Super-ego finds out that Naruto is not a doctor, though. That would be grounds for a butt-kicking, I think. Keep it up.