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for The Id and the Super-ego

by Adi

person Anaheyla
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke's the Super-Ego in more than one way. ^_^
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More, want more. Please.
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey now! you can't just cut me off like that!! T_T i was getting into that. >_>

great job. i look forward to more.
person jasmin
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah I want more
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes, definitely more please.
person Krystal
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit, that was interesting. What I want to know, is what's going to happen when Tsunade comes back, finds out what Naruto did, and when Sasuke finds out that Naruto was pretending to be a doctor. Hey, are you going to make Sasuke think that he does that with all his patients and Naruto has to prove that he actually likes Sasuke later? How about if Sasuke starts to date Naruto after a chance meeting, and then finds out about Naruto's none existent psychological training?
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story, I loved how you included Orochimaru, though I have to admit I was rooting for them to go more than just kisses, but it's the first chapter, just keep up the good work! Loved Sasuke's reaction too
person Mija
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehe this is funny and a bit smexy, I soo want more, great start hope to read more in the future, the very NEAR future if possible, hint hint...lol. ty for the wonderful read, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
person bevino
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Of course we want more. That was fucking awesome! Goos work! Fantastic! Splendid! ^_^
person hina88
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was brilliant!!! loooooooooooooool when naruto was singing and dancing to spice girls my mouth fell open in shock and i was speechless for a few seconds before i burst into laughter and had everyone looking at me like i was an idiot loool :D. The kiss was O_O whoa HOT!!! heh and Sasuke's in denial *smirks* heh, well he's got the proof he needs now ne? ^_^ anyway, loved it and can't wait for the next one ^_6

Hina xXxx