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for The Id and the Super-ego

by Adi

person Irrlich
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG DROOOOOL yes more please, i'm speachless!
person cutiedraco
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If he's getting paid for this , is this considered a kind of prostitution ... ;)
I liked this beginning a lot , leave it to Naruto to offer that kind of solution
person SpacePirate Doll
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hellz yeah! I want more!!

xD
Oh man, this was such an amusing start and such an original idea too~

'Cause we all know if anyone needed a shrink in the Naruto world; it would be Sasuke.
Hands down, and I LOVED how the smut went along, hilarious!
You really kept to the rivarly and competitiveness I love so much about this pairing.
Embrassed Sasuke was the cutest thing EVAR!

I really hope your bribery works!
I'm a HUGE(unbelievably huge) fan of SoD~
I'd love that fic 'til my dying day xD

Please update!
I REALLY love how this started, and it looks very promising!

I can't wait to know what happens later on,
and if Sasuke will return for his "therapy"
xD

Much love for this THROUGHLY entertaining fic!
person MALLRATS2007
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
VERY INTERESTING I LIKED IT AND YES I WANT MORE
person Luthien Wildglen
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
“He…erm… tried to swallow a live rodent without chewing…” Sakura sounded like she might gag.

Lol, I don’t know if I laughed at that because it was so strange, or if it was because I could see Orochimaru trying to do that if he was mentally disturbed…though then again I’ve always thought of Orochimaru as a tad deranged. Anyway though, the fic was excellent. I would really love some more….pretty please? I greatly look forward to the next chapter(s). My best wishes for you and your writing.
person suiryoka
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hell yes, I want more! Poor Sasuke! Naruto's such a manipulator! XD I can't wait for more!
person qwerty
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well that was certainly interesting... ::snicker::
person animehead
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooh I liked this. So funny and hot and so freaking funny!! (I know I already said that) But this:

"Itachi was off the hook because he had managed to produce irrefutable medical documents stating his infertility. Itachi’s little soldiers were as dead on the inside as their maker."

I will love that line FOREVER. I actually laughed loudly. I'm glad no one was here to see it. You are so awesome. Please tell me you'll be writing more of this.


person Dragon7
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great start!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
person llyoung
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved the slug pictures and that Orochimaru thinks he is a snake. Nice touches.

Please continue.