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for The Id and the Super-ego

by Adi

person gabby
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MORE, MORE, MORE... want so much MORE...plz ^_______^..... anb besides there was so funny moments, that i was almost dieing! GREAT job, WELL DONE, la bravo!!!
person KariNeko
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HELL YES WE WANT MORE! <3 I love how you write Sasuke and (ESPECIALLY) Naruto! PLEASE update soon!
person Hoshi
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yum~ :3 Yesh more! xD
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was good! I liked it a lot.
Please write more!^^
person eclipses
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hell yes i want more T_T
person plaidshp
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL That was awesome
person beautifullove348
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whew!! That was getting pretty steamy ;) Anybody got a fan around here? A second chapter would make this reader VERY happy:)
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have never laughed so hard in my life! I don't know what was funnier, Orochimaru thinking he's a snake, or Naruto singing the spice girls, or Naruto pretending to know what he was doing....'tell me what you see' priceless just priceless oh please continue this, to not would be a crime! Lol wonderful job Adi!
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol Naru-chan seems always up to a challenge and when he said he could make Hulk Hogan turn gay I nearly died laughing. You are brilliant and yes me and I bet a lot others would like to see more
person amberblood
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes! more more more! *chants*