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for The Id and the Super-ego

by Adi

person hsbs
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cor blimey...can i watch you *publicly smooch* zrina and allys?

Sasuke googled gay...now wait a minute...

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OMG! He found YAOI - :happy dance: do you think he read this? I wonder if he had a Y!Gallery account, or regularly came here to the Naruto fics to get his fix...I wonder what penname he used? Hrmmm...theres food for thought!If someone would like to use this concept and turn it into something more substantial for me to read I will happily review LOL

OMG i'm reading this and I'm actually snorting! i cant review this chapter anymore; Its fucking good - you know it - so im just gonna read and enjoy!

/loves
person Anissa34
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh... OH... LMAO... OH KAMI(GOD)... ROFL... THAT was so great... short~sweet~SEXY-SMUT!

I got to go to bed now, but wow... that was so funny! I liked that you explained and gave the plot a few months here and there... the hold Sasuke realized he's gay and takes the time to explore it and then he realizes that he not just gay, but he's gay for 'Doctor' Naruto... Oh, and Naruto's cocky comments all the way through-Shit that was funnier!

*Clapping-bows*

I'll be reading your other fic you just finished soon~, but I really have to go to bed right now~!

~Anissa
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyable to the last. That final sex scene was soooooo fucking creative. Your a genius with a good pun. I adored every second of it.
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This plot is fabulous. Your characterization of Naruto is spot on, perfect, flawless, made me wet myself with joy. I adore your sheer genius oh so very much.
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yup I had fun, again. I really enjoy your stories, just so you know. *smiles*
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LMFAO! YES! I was waiting for the press to publish THAT story! XDD
person Gwyllion
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear gods....I cried to see the end of this awesome chapter! And the smut! O___O *massive nosebleeds* You are so friggin talented in writing that I'm an absolute addict! Please...more drugs! <33333
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loooooove it........seriously i LOVE it
person hisoka
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
glad sasuke stopped being afraid of what he likes and that his parents understand too(thanks to some dug up info)twas short and sweet glad he didnt take like 18 chapters to figure it out.

~kurosaki hisoka
person Taylor
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I THINK THAT WAS THE BEST THING I'VE EVER READ.
THIS IS TRULY A DIRTY DOUJINSHI PUT INTO WORDS. It was so graphic, and I was just reeling. Like, I was fanning myself, seriously.


And Ooooh Naruto....He's such an excellent boyfriend....for Sasuke at least lol.>:3
AMAZING Job. Keep up the aweseome work.

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