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Kawaii!! I loved it! I really really did! ... Hmm, maybe calling it 'cute' isn't the right word? How about Dangerously-Smexy? or Deliciously-over-the-top-HOT!!!? WHoo lets go with that one, huh? Yep, that's right new word ^.^ And it's all for you!!

<3 <3 <3
marry me?

waaaaa!!!!!! public smut really does win over the other! XD ... and i love the ending!

:'D I think that was worth the 4 and a half hour nap I took in order to read this, srsly, smut, full on, great, hot, sexy, teasing, loving, controlling, peverted, PUBLIC sex. I was grinning all the way through this and just picturing Naruto in my mind (and Sasuke of course) completely, utterly, adored this chapter. About time you admitted it Sasuke, and the ending was win. Because it rounded everything else off nicely and just hahah, wow!
But my favourite bit was probably the typing on the computer...x3 okay that was my favourite part.
*must go eat something or pass out now*

Lol that's gotta be one of the most amusing but extremely shmexy stories evar. ^^~!

I loved every moment of that. And you are right, public smut tops full out smut anytime, anywhere.

OOhh~ I love this story!Horny and teasing naruto is the best!!!
When Naruto is this sexy, all Sasuke can do is submit!

Nice job, very creative! The sex was good too!!!

I love you.
I just finished six hours of homework and that just made my day.
Cheers!

awww i'm kinda sad it's over with, but ah well. sasuke is so mean. but anyway, i'm glad naruto was able to make him come out of the closet with public smexing. it was kind of like lady and the tramp, except with naruto giving sasuke a blowjob underneath the table and having ordered ramen instead of pasta.

dang tho, naru has the patience of a saint to deal with sasuke. meh i guess that's true in the manga, too... yay, *throws confetti* the story is complete.