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for The Id and the Super-ego

by Adi

person Menow
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh...Come On!! Just one more good smutty, smut chapter. I so love SasUKE. Especially with mischevious Naruto. They need one more good lay! Please?
person lo
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done!! Funny and sexy and that blow job scene in chaprer 4 was intense. Nice work!
person Allys
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL, okay so this took me forever to get here, but I didn't forget you! *huggles* I'd never forget you. This was fantastic in oh so many ways. I laughed my ass off from beginning to end XD. And to top it off there were little sweet bits inbetween. And omg, you're so right XD, public smut does trump all ;D. Especially when it's public with repressed but can't resist Sasuke *evil grin and Glompage* Thank you lovey, that was priceless, especially with the outage at the end. LOL, I can see Naruto's editor Screaming at him for giving away the scoop, but hey, exclusive tops scoop anyday XD. The hand job conversation was the greatest, that was so fucking Hott O.O *drool* lol, with Naruto keeping his cool and making Sasuke lose his, Gah! *♥'s you* I'm sad this over, this is definitely one of my favs of yours but damn did it end with a bang! XD *huggles u again and squishes for good measure* It's finished - take a moment for yourself while we all bow down ;) *Muah*
person gaara89
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is really good! please update soon!
person Zrina
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your sense of humor!! It is what makes your stories so fun to read! I like how Naruto is always pushing Sasuke's boundaries and forcing him to become more than he is and you show that wonderfully. I can't quote lines because all of it is love! It was about time Sasuke finally yanked the rod out of his ass.. after all, he had to make room for Naruto!!

/hugs
Z
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*faints* That was hot. and YAY!! Sasuke has finally come out of the closet, and caught on film none the less. Wonderful story. Thank you so much fpr sharing.
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*mynullnostalgia*

I see I see!

I'm glad I rec'd you. You shall and you will be one of my NaruSasu-fic Guru :D

<3
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This can't be the end!

What happens next?!
person Anaheyla
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Genius. Plain and simple. Adi, this story. Is just beyond words.

You're definitely one of my favorite authors in this place. :)
person llyoung
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was great. Very funny. I laughed thru the whole chapter.