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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice story ^___^ sakura's reaction whenever sasuke came in was SO damn funny XD0D as well as the part on orochimaru thinking to be a snake XDDDDDDDDDD and jiraya's obsession and generally the whole clinic-thing filled with crazy people made me laugh! And of course the smut wins!*.*
uh...last thing, you could have avoided mentioning amazon or google i think they were reduntant..not really necessary for a fic >.>and to a less extent the spice girls song...hmm...oh well, anyways, since it did made the scene funnier it's ok.
^__^will you post another chap??
uh...last thing, you could have avoided mentioning amazon or google i think they were reduntant..not really necessary for a fic >.>and to a less extent the spice girls song...hmm...oh well, anyways, since it did made the scene funnier it's ok.
^__^will you post another chap??
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!
Naruto had a photocopy of Sasuke's but on the wall!! ROFL!
Naruto had a photocopy of Sasuke's but on the wall!! ROFL!
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My god, Master. That was hilarious and hot. I laughed ad drooled the entire way through it and then that last line.... that last line killed me!!! I loved it. Even if you don't make another chapter for it, that ending was great. You're so awesome! I hope you're still working on your dom skills. I've been bad. hehehe
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahahaha!! this is a great storey. increadibly sweet, i hope you keep adding onto it
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww I need more! T__T One of the few stories I enjoy on here! ><
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LMAO. I absolutely love your style man. Loved this. Keep up the good and keep'em com'n eh
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you are amazing. full of smut and hilarity. thank you sooo much :D
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah! i really, really liked sasuke as uke!! i'm surprised with myself :D
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loooooooooooooooooool Naruto and the ramen monster was juust too funny looool XD trust Naruto to have those kinds of dreams loool. I loved hearing about Sasuke's 'soul seraching' lool, heh and the way naruto mistook him for a monster and seemed to be about to attack him with the ramen loooooool :D Naruto's too great - honestly, you just make me love him more and more. The smut though *smirks* heh GO NARUTO!!! He deserved to get some after Sasuke left him all high and dry the last time - I felt damn deprived when he did that you know so - good to read about Naruto getting a nice peace of ass ^_6 can't wait for the next one ^_^
Hina xXxx
Hina xXxx
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! I loved it. Can't wait to read more! XD