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for The Id and the Super-ego

by Adi

person Dragon7
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
person kknjsidakota
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay you updated. i love the humor and both sasuke and naruto are great with the "business date" an sasuke trying out naruto look a likes and admitting it wasn't working, just great details. Especially the ending was prefect, something naruto would do and sasuke would ask in that tone. i love this story
person Kerrisa
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love you! This fic was hot. But you know what? I think Zrina-sama might need some more bribery, so you should write another fic.. or two... or three..>_>... you know, just to keep every-I mean-Zrina-sama happy.. ^.^ Lol Loved the fic, You're such an awesome writer!! Keep up the marvelous work!!
person cutsycat
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh. More, more. Soon, please?
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaha, I must say I love this story so far!! I was wondering if anything would come up since Sasuke was on the photocopier and I'm glad that it did! The entire chapter definitely made my night!! Mad props to you and keep up the excellent work!
person david_holmes
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wowwie!!! I reallly enjoyed this! Sasuke as uke and *this* appealing... that's my very first time and I must say I ADORED...

I love your devious Naruto... I'd never imagined that he could make such a sexy seme...

And I must say, I laughed like CRAZY in the beginning... especially with Orochimaru thinking he was a snake and swallowing a rodent whole... oh god.. *shudders*

Wonderful!!!!
person Zrina
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hrmm public smoochies huh? WOOT!! And I would have to say that I think Sasuke has the happy crack this time!!! Loved it, but of course you know that already!! I like that Sasuke finally removed the rod out from his ass. And replaced it with Naruto's! I also like how Naruto approached the oral sex... Sasuke owed him big time for leaving him high and dry last time!!

All in all Wonderful and Smutilicious!!!

/hugs
person llyoung
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great and we found out what Naruto did with the photocopy.
person Anaheyla
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another chapter. Ssssssseeeeeeeexxx!!!

Sex is fun, especially when it's between Naruto and SasUKE. ^_^
person fangirl
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was great...I was looking forward to your update. Surprisingly adorable in a fabulously smutty kind of way. Hope to see more from you!