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for The Id and the Super-ego

by Adi

person despairs
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
“Is that a photocopy of my butt on the wall with a bulls eye painted on it?!”

LMMFAO!! That was simply priceless...what a way to end the story lol i love it.
person Henki8
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Of course there will be a third and a fourth and a fifth part!

Anyhow, just wanted to point out a small but disturbing error in this chapter: 'Sasuke sighed dreamily, a hand automatically reaching up to wipe away any saliva.' I think you ment to say SASKURA
person Makayla
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SQQQUUUUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is so GOOD!!! I LOVE IT!!!! CAPS LOCK CAN'T FULLY SHOW MY FANGIRLY GLEE AT READING THIS!!!!!! I wait eagerly for the next part (please write more soon)
person SpacePirateDoll
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man what a CLIFFHANGER! >_<

Oh noes~

I wonder what'll happen!
Oh, I'm assuming THIS is where the drama ensues, amirite?

When Sasuke found out how Naruto wasn't a doctor, I had to cover my face
I was like 'Oh no Oh no Oh no' over and over in my head.
I'm silly, I know =P

Ah, the smut.. and such good smut it was!
It was my favorite kind;
Passionate with a dash of Non-con
(but you really know one of them is in denial)
xD

I'm weird, I know =3

Ah!
I can't wait to find out what happens next!!
::fails arms::

I'm so anxious xD

Hope you update soon, this chapter was awesome~

Much love!
person Zrina
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
/takes photocopy of Sasu's but and makes bull's eye centered you-know-where.. hands it to Naruto and tells hiim it is for target practice!!

Love it, sweety!! But you knew that already!! Sasuke is going to get a bad rep for being a tease. He always comes and goes!! Poor Naurto is going to have permanent blue balls!

Can't wait for the cough climax cough!! :D
person nlblake
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sasuke...his family really screwed him up, ne?

I absolutely adored the image of a furious Sasuke pulling Naruto along on his tie. Don't ask me why, but the way you described it let it stand out so vividly in my mind that the rest(even the hot smut)blanched in comparison.

I really hope you'll update soon. :-)
person LizaAndHerBlackCat
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it very very much, and I hope you will update soon...
(I'm a fucking romantic, i would like to see them together soooooooo soon!!)
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke is soooo cute when he is all confused. Well, can't wait for the promised 3rd chappie.
person Xenobia
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was fabu! Sasuke is just deliciously angsty...I love it!

More please...

Xenobia
person ramenlover4
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay! I read it! lolz XD It was...awesome! XDDD