rate_review Reviews

Wow! The second chapter was even more fabulous than the first! (I reviewed the 1st chapter on ff.net) Hilarious!! So fun and silly and just plain awesome!!! :) I loved it!! You kind of left it open so there's definintley room for another chapter so I hope you will write more on it!! :)

awww, poor naru but shoot me if that wasn't hot as fuck. ^__^ looking foward to the next update!

"The rest of Sasuke’s commands came out as ‘ngh…. uh… ah… mm’ so Naruto improvised a little." HAHAHAHA That's hot and funny. But Sasuke's really stubborn so I have a feeling he's going to be in denial for a while. I liked the thought of Sasuke dragging Naruto off by his tie and Naruto setting off the copier for I'm sure is gonna be a hot momento. Both instances were very creative and I didn't expect it. It's be funny to see that picture in their newspaper tho. LOL

wow, this was such an intense chapter.

i loved the raw emotions that sasuke's only able to emit in naruto's presence (or indirectly through whatever moronic thing naruto did). it really brings out the character of sasuke in my opinion. i think sasuke's always been a repressed individual, who only knows how to lash out at the world in naruto's presence.

i love the calm/cool facade when he's in front of other people, such as when he was in tsunade's office, or in the newspaper room, dragging naruto behind him albeit, somewhat calmly.

thanks for writing part 2, i look forward to reading part 3~!

I bow down on my hands and knees to you...God that was amazing. MORE PLEEEEEEAAAAASSSSEEEE!

that was awesome and very hot. please continue very soon.

This story is... AWESOME!

love the title btw :)

More PLEASE!!!

You better run your ass away. Stop asking and just write the damn thing would you. If you have an idea go with it. Part of writing is what you want to write. Get on with it....please
Slave

Yes! I want more, please update.