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for Konoha Kara No Dansei

by RoseHime

schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice concept.

I'm definitely eager to see where this story goes next. Don't keep me waiting too long. :)
person Allys
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmnnn, a murder mystery? Models dying brutally? Hmmmmnnnn, interesting, a plot descends XD. I love Gaara, and Sai and Neji is hilarious, but LOL, I'm so with Naruto about Sasuke. I was totally publishing the pic he took, LOL, centre page spread if they let me XD. *Snickers* would serve his bastardly ass right. How freaking hard is it to stand still and take a few fucking pictures! God, LOL I understand he doesn't want to be a model and he has no desire to be there, but he is there, fucking man up and deal, spoiled brat. I'm so glad this is NaruSasu *loves*, although his reactions to Itachi were really really cute! So LOL, he does have his redeeming qualities (they're just buried, really really deep *in goes Naruto with a torch light and a shovel* He can do it, I have faith XD). Jiraiya was definitely a highlight!! *Loves him* Thank you so much for the update XD.
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hm~ Interesting! 8D I love it! Please update agian soon!
person Nath
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. A crazy photographer, a mad staff, prissy and hot male model... and a murderer on the loose. GOOD !!! VERY GOOD !!! Update as soon as possible, pleeaase, because this story rocks. :)
person qwerty
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What???!! Seriously? Sasuke's undercover? Well it's pretty pointless now since he's so recognizable. Itachi will be interesting to watch... Poor Naruto!
update!
person qwerty
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Good job.
update!
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dude! this is so awesome! i loved how you introduced the crew especially Sai! i look foward to more conversations between him and naru. i eagerly look foward to the next update.
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ah, love at first sight, sasuxnaru style :p

im enjoying this, very nice and honestly disturbingly accurate so far (i go to design school with fashion kids, and we do photos for them and go on studio tours)
i always enjoy a good "OMG I HATE YOU" start to these fics
hope to hear more ^.^
person Chria
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love your characterizations! They're lively, bold, and all are presented as unique individuals. The plot feels open-ended because Naruto has to charm everyone to get good pictures so there’s room for anyone/Naruto just for fun. lol And at the same time very deep since really, the only reason he took the job was to discover his heritage. To find out who his parents were and figure out more about himself. I enjoyed Naruto’s and Sasuke’s first meeting because I never believed it was love at first sight. They are very different! So having Sasuke be the biggest pain in the ass model for Naruto to work with feels right and funny as hell too. Heehee Please keep going, I’ve enjoyed what you have got here. Much love~
person kataru
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is really interesting @_@ will wait patiently for the next chappie >_>