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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved every word of this so far.
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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AMAZING CHAPTER! I loved it! I loved how Kiba and Naruot immediately hit it off! It was perfect. Though Neji was a bit OOC :P I was waiting forever for this chapter. And I'm glad I did because I was very impressed. Your writing style and descriptive writing is absolutely perfect. And such creativity. I love it...love it, love it. PLease update soon for I can't wait to see what happens next! :)
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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First time i'm reading this story. I am very intrigued, i have to say. I hope karma will somehow bite Sasuke in the nads and make hism wish he'd helped Naruto. Sounds great so far. Do update soon. :)
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what a great story.
I look forward to the next update.
I look forward to the next update.
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME! I love Kiba in this story. He and Naruto make for great laughs. Especially the way you wrote it. I really want to see what happens with Naruto and the company. Very original. Update soon.
Chishio
Chishio
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hee, this story is so great! I love it. It makes me smile, and I started giggling when Lee and Gai came in. xD And whoo, I was actually RIGHT when I guessed that it was Sai who was with Neji. Usually I get those things wrong.
I can totally imagine Akamaru humping Shikamaru's leg and Shika yelling "Kiba, get your damn dog off me!!" xD
I can totally imagine Akamaru humping Shikamaru's leg and Shika yelling "Kiba, get your damn dog off me!!" xD
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really excited about this story. You have a good solid plot so far, that you took the time to develop. We need more stories like yours around here, and you'll be in good company. I don't know how I missed this the first time XD, but I really enjoyed both chapters. I love the dynamics in 'Konoha' LOL. This looks like it's gonna be a Lot of fun XD. Hope you update soon.
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooo please do more! update soon!
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whats going on with itachi?
updates?
updates?