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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehehe... what a nice story. Although I do think Naruto is OOC, I bet any teenager would do mostly the same thing. Anyway, please update soon! I can hardly wait to see what happens!
By the way, nice lemon with Ayame, I never saw it coming, but I really enjoyed it. Keep on writing!
By the way, nice lemon with Ayame, I never saw it coming, but I really enjoyed it. Keep on writing!
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great work on this chapter! I impressed with the amount of detail you used as well as the plot you've developed in your story which seperates it from the oversized one-shot stories out there. As for your challenge, I've already found another fanfic with a Naruto/Ayame pairing that was made before your's I'm sorry to say, though I find your's to be better. You can find it at this link: http://naruto.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=544198949&chapter=20
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August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*laughing* Oh, the lewd perversion!!!
Naruto needs to pace himself or the back lash will knock him silly!
And this is planned? *laughing* EVEN BETTER! Jiriaya is my hero.
Naruto needs to pace himself or the back lash will knock him silly!
And this is planned? *laughing* EVEN BETTER! Jiriaya is my hero.
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August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Most impressive. Please continue.
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July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hate to say this but Demon God of Chaos got you beat with Naruto/Ayame. As a matter of fact he has had Naruto do every girl(even some guys turned into girls) that isn't Sakura, Ino, or Hinata(Hinata being raped doesn't count)
here is the link to the multiple one-shots http://naruto.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=544198949 chapter 20 is Naruto/Ayame. He even did a Naruto/Naruko & Naruto/Rin.
here is the link to the multiple one-shots http://naruto.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=544198949 chapter 20 is Naruto/Ayame. He even did a Naruto/Naruko & Naruto/Rin.
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July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
will i love the story. so far keep them comming and your not the frist i hate to say
http://naruto.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=544198949&chapter=20
there ya go and i liked your better and keep them comming
http://naruto.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=544198949&chapter=20
there ya go and i liked your better and keep them comming
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July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
pretty good :D
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July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well i have to admit although it long it was worth the wait for it dang it had a lot and two girls in one night i wonder if Naruto will get more imaginative about the sex him i also wonder whats going to happen in that shower now who will Naruto's next vic.. i mean volunteer can't wait to find out.
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha... oh man! This is such a fun story. I'm hoping you write a lot more chapters to it!! I'm also looking forward to the lemon between Ten-Ten and Naruto. Ohhh boy! Ten-Ten is the best!
P.D: What were you thinking when you called Kakashi a 'responsible adult'? XD
P.D: What were you thinking when you called Kakashi a 'responsible adult'? XD
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
http://naruto.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=544198949&chapter=1
Chapter 20. Great story, great writing and such.
Chapter 20. Great story, great writing and such.