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for Scroll of Sexual Desire

by EclipseCannon

schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sweet two fucking lemons.
person Anon
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice
person Anon
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lets have naruto fuck the brains out of hinata
person neos
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter. but wrong statement

see : Demon God Of Chaos: my collection of Naruto - pairings chapter 20
http://naruto.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=544198949&chapter=20
person darnod
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
http://naruto.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=544198949&chapter=20

all naruto oneshots and chapter 20 is naruto/ayame. glad another one was added though. enjoyed this chapter but much happier that you just updated at all. go from a lot of chapters in a few days to not updating for awhile is a bad sign. usually means someone giving up on their story. ayame and ino in this chapter made up for lack of updates. although i am awaiting the mff that is listed in the story codes. thought that was going to be this chapter. can't wait for it. wondering what jiraiya's alterior motive is aside from research. and why tsunade would agree to it.
person Kuso13
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You aren't the first to do Ayame and i can prove it.
http://naruto.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=544198949&chapter=20
Naruto and Ayame. That was there before your story even started so no you aren't original.
Later.
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha, thats right! You take it like the kinky little slut you are, Ino!! Even your father knows what a whore you are! >:) Mwhahahahahaa!!


Hehe, quite the delightful, entertaining little chapter. 0:) Keep up the good work! ^^
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yo, I just gotta say to Kuso13:

Who cares if someone else did an Ayame/Naruto pairing before? That doesn't make this one any less original, nor does it make you any less of a jackass. It was damn good smut and you should appreciate it for what it is!
person Jin
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for doing the Naruto/Ayame pairing justice. The only way the lemon could have been better would be if there was a shower scene involved. I really love shower scenes.

As for your question, you are actually the third person on this site to do a Naruto/Ayame fanfiction/lemon (at least to may knowledge). However, the other two aren't very good, especially when compared to yours, so you might not find them worth reading.

Here are the links anyway:

http://naruto.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=544198949&chapter=20

http://naruto.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600091678&chapter=6

The links are directly to the chapters where the lemons are located.
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This fic needs a tsunade/naruto chapter! pretty please?