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July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this looks pretty neat. I hope you keep it up ill look out for it.
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July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is damn good so far. Please continue.
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July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, You updated.
good job on another great chapter.
Once again I'm loven this story, can't wait to see what happens next.
also love the idea of the scroll evolving with each use, can't wait to see what other jutsu are uncovered.
SO once again good job on the story & good luck with the rest of it.
good job on another great chapter.
Once again I'm loven this story, can't wait to see what happens next.
also love the idea of the scroll evolving with each use, can't wait to see what other jutsu are uncovered.
SO once again good job on the story & good luck with the rest of it.
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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(Drools) Two lemons...and a NaruAya lemon being one of them! What more could a guy ask for?
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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well that sucks about missing the update day but hey can't wait for more this is getting interesting and i don't think Naruto would have trouble dispatching Kiba but then again i like kiba bashing so ya.
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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHA your really ooc'ed kakashi on chapter 4
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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*lol* both naruto's sensei are perverts. nice story! keep it up, i want to know what naruto's planning.
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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great! I ove it! I wish I was you so I can bear to write Naruto in any possible pairing. When ever I tried to do it I always have Hinata on my mind and a feeling that he only belong to Hinata and Vice Versa. I salute you with my deepest and truest form of respect and may you make senseless sex great!
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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was so boring. But at least we know how the scroll works and you did promis two lemons for the next chapter so all is well
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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hello, i loved your fanfic, it´s not only a lemon story, UPDATE fast.