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oh man... this chapter is just soooo OOC for both Naruto and his descriptions of his fellow Konoha Kunoichis. Are you a strict watcher of the English dubs? Of course, this is the first chapter of the story to really strike me like that...

that said...

I just gotta gush about your description of Kakashi and his reaction to Naruto wanting to read the Icha Icha series. He's like a rabid fan girl! (Squee!) It just brightened up my day. ^^

Eh? Naruto doesn't know Temari's last name? I find that odd given he knows of Gaara's last name of Sabaku, so it should be reasonable Naruto can figure that Temari's last name is the same. After all, Gaara and Temari are siblings, thus they share the same last name.

Anyway, I look forward to Naruto getting it on with the ramen stand girl. I wouldn't mind Naruto getting Tenten, Ino, and Temari before setting on Hinata. :)

BTW, why would any guy want that second version of that jutsu? The first one, as Jiriya said, makes for one-stands without consequences. Sakura wouldn't remember anything, so Naruto should be safe. Now if Naruto uses that second jutsu, the woman would only have sex with him but not in the romantic sense. That's not good, because if Naruto says settles with Hinata as his steady girlfriend (according to your notes, he will), yet uses that second jutsu on another woman, Naruto will be in deep trouble because that other woman will keep coming to him for sexual favors, etc. I can't think of any woman Naruto can safely use that second jutsu without consequences, unless you're plaining a harem for him which your notes say you are not.

This seems like my kind of story. I'm sure I'm gonna enjoy it a lot.

man, I Love this story.
I like how you combine smut with a good story, makes it more interesting.
Anyway in the next chapter I think you should go into more detail about the scroll(how long it lasts, any memory afterwords, ect)but try to work the lemon in if you can.Anyway please update soon, Can't Wait!

PS: Maybe you can involve some of the older women such as Kurenai or tsunade
Maybe even get some OC characters. just throwing out ideas

OH MAN THIS IS GOING TO GET GOOD

oh hell yeah plz up date soon plz im on my hands a knees

Interesting. I read your note that this would end up being a NaruHina. Just how many of the girls would Naruto have sex with before he settles down with Hinata? He does know the last names of Ino and Temari, thus it would be easier for him to bang them before banging Tenten, given he doesn't know her last name. Hinata would be last if she's going to be Naruto's steady. :)

well, that was interesting

i wodenr what will happen next

can't wait til the next chapter

what about kurenai,anko,hana,and maybe shizune,also maybe yugao

SEE YA

You have to write a Naruto/Ayame lemon! There are so few of them out there and she is so freaking HOT. I'd be really disappointed if you skipped over it.

I also hope you include Temari in on the fun at some point, Shikamaru be damned.

Great story so far. Update soon!

eh...its fine. i think that one was called slave no jutsu. got about 3 chapters in before that stopped being updated. this will definately be better then that if you continue it. how long does the jutsu last? is sakura going to continue lusting after naruto forever or now that they have had sex is the impulse gone? can't wait for the rest of this story. keep up the good work.