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i hope you had smores with stay puff sorry i didn't send chocolate and gramhn crackers. for the gooey sweetness is still there. with sasuke and naruto finally talking again. i am full of sweetness and light once again. although i see how you did neiji so he is no longer considered a threat to me. ino on the other hand is another kettle of fish. is she gonna pop up and say that she is pregnant by sasuke. i can't remeber but is sai going to be included in this story at all. that ends my questions because it all depends on how the next chapter plays out. can't wait for the next update.

OMG! This is sooo good! Please continue soon!

this was such a gooey sweet chapter that i am sending you the stay puff marshmallow manfrom ghostbusters to eat or explode whichever is your pleasure. i glad you had momo talk to sasuke it was unexpected and you know how i like the surprises. i just would have thought a typical scenerio with haku being the one to talk to sasuke. so it was really slick how you had naruto's father figure talk to sasuke. maybe after sasuke talks to naruto then i am guessing in the chapter after next naruto should be speaking to momo again. i hoping it will be soon cause a sad momo makes me sad for him. when naruto confronts orochimaru (finally spelled it right) is something going to happen to one of his friends or sasuke. i have been wanting to ask if this is the time that leadersama will show up again and try to get rid od both orochimaru and naruto (sorta like a driveby). what if sasuke showed up then and was severly wounded would naruto kirk out and start a gang war. that would be kinda cool too considering that sasuke is supposed to be naruto's anchor to this world. so if something happened to his anchor how will naruto act. sorry rabling because the possibilities are endless and i can't wait to see which one you choose. see ya at the next update.

even though everything is now basically in the open and they are talking it out i still wonder about something. sasuke and naruto was talking about the yakuzi but neither brought up the fact that oochimaru was raping naruto for alsmost a whole year. will this be a deciding fator when they discuss this whether sasuke leaves naruto (temporarily) or not. will their talk about this subject make or break naruto when it comes for the time for him to confront oochimaru. will he be having flashbacks during the battle (or something that will make him freeze up) giving oochimaru an advantage. what if naruto lost and instead of killing him oochimaru demanded that he have to come to is side. wouldn's that be something if sasuke had save naruto from oochimaru (two avening down with one stone). since naruto and sasuke may split is this the time that you will now have neiji make his move since he said that he would go after naruto if sasuke let him go. does neiji even know about naruto's past (family being murdered, in league with the yakuzi, anything) because wouldn't this effect how naruto would see his as a potential partner. also now that naruto has talked to sasuke about the yakuzi he at least seems to feel more comfrotable in seeing the yakuzi as a means of protecting his family. i like that he seems to be getting his old spunk back. thanks and can't wait for the next update.

this was onw very emotionally charged chapter. i knew that tacky ass oochimaru would spell the beans about naruto's invovlement with the yakuzi. i never him ti openly tell everyone that he not only raped naruto but that he killed his family too. i am amazed that oochimaru so boldly admits to his crimes and the only one who seems shocked is naruto. for working so hard (i know this had to be a draining chapter) i will make a bento of your choosing. now on to chapter 31.

oh my gosh i thought htis was hilarious. ok ok let me be specific i thought when sasuke was either talking or thinking about ino cracked me up. i like how you gave her the thirty year old my biological clock is ticking desperate housewife feel. kudos to your briallance as a writer i mean you ahve to admit it's bad when you are trying to get a drunk gay man to sleep with you. of course the drama after that of naruto being there to hear their arguement was a nice cliffie. has naruto and sasuke been seperated since they spoke to oochimaru and how long of a period was it. i get the impression that it was at least several weeks and yet i'm not sure (it never hurts to ask if you not sure right. what actually does the challenge consist of. does naruto and oochimaru have a swordfight (since it's the yakuzi) or will be some sort of martial arts standoff. oochimaru would naturally be good with a sword and naruto is takng the lessons so anything goes i guess. also are you going to go into more detail about what happened after oochimaru told naruto that momo knew that he had killed his family (like how he felt about momo keeping that a secret from him etc.). thanks for a great capter and can't wait to see the next one.

i'm sorry i have never heard of the author you mentioned but maybe i know some of her stories through the titles so if isn't to much of an imposition could you name some or all. of ayane yamane's work i only have thre books. the arget in the finder series which is put out by bebeautiful (www.bebeautifulmanga.com) and the other is crimson spell put out by kittymedia (www.kittymedia .com). thanks for anwering my questions this chapter about what sasuke thought about gaara. although i think that sasuke taking so long to figure stuff out when they was talking in front of him trifling since he is supposed to be a genius (come on really or is it just me). i tell you the tension is really getting to me (doom). is naruto in hiding with someone he knows who knows everything like sakura. he has to be with someone he knows because he has no money. and shouldn't he be worried about someone using sasuke to get to him. he is acting very un-naruto like being so scared and running away (naruto come home you know like lassy). unless naruto is in the shadows watching sasuke without him knowing like a stalker (that would be nice too). sorry my mental issues are showing again. sorry to hear you was ill and glad to know you are feeling better. here's a get well basket of skittles so that you can taste the rainbow (i know nothing motives you more than sugar). can't wait to see the next chapter.

ayane yamane fans around the world unite and form the massive robot crazy chicks who love hot possesive guys (or maybe i am just talking about me) you have really been earning your choclate with this chapter. i am so glad that naruto had a chance to finally tell sasuke about a piece of his past. i really hope that sasuke ends up goimg back home with naruto. that sceneio is just jam packed with possibilities. like oochimaru telling sasuke about the family. or how about oochimaru just telling sasuke that he is naruto's uncle. although i did have a question about gaara and how sasuke reacted to him. was he told that he worked for the shop or because they are in some of the same classes they are supposed to be studying together. that was not really explained to much and i am curious. thanks and i also would like to know how many ayane books you have and their titles. i am curious about releases of her work. double and triple sundae thanks with sprinkles.

me likey how you are slowly building the tension up. sasuke keeps wondering why gaara always visits naruto with his sword. what he should be aking is why is this man hanging around my man. i really don't have any questions this time but i thought i would try to inspire (haha) you. i want you to get this picture in your mind. sexy long black haired man with beautiful red eyes with another sexy waist legnth black haired old head with mesmerizing gold eyes. they are doing naughty things to each other rubbing smooth pale hands across smooth pale skin. maybe the long haired black youth will ahve a studded dog collar and be lead around on a chain by the sexy gold eyed man. they walk into a bedroom with the uffs dangling off the headboard then..... ok now let your imagination go. as lways can't wait til te next update.

It has been 28 chapters dont you think its about time to tell sasuke the truth.

dont you think we have waited too long already